It is true that, in this contemporary era, everyone wants to live in a newly houses that is why this idea is being gained lots of popularity in all over the world. However, some introspect that modern homes should be built in the traditional style whereas, others beleive government should give consent to built new houses according to their taste. According to my perspective, having a new home creates a good impression on other from our sides.
To start with, there are numerous points on this. Firstly, people want to show their wealth on the basis of their home. Secondly, they want to live in a fully modernised house like cctv cameras, chimneys, air conditioner e.t.c. because it is not possible in any traditional house and it is very hard to put these things in those houses. For example, it plays a important role in our economy as well because more and more high rises buildings are being constructed steadily and people are living together. In addition, they prefer to use some renewable resources for lights and it safes our environment too.
Looking at the other view, people contemplate that sizeable majority should make same houses in colour, size, e.t.c. because it plays a big role in our culture. Furthermore, they have keen interest to keep their culture for forever and It shows adore fro each other. For example, we have one place in india name as varindavan. It is highly recommended place by people in all over the world due to its dilapidated culture.
On a concluding note, undoubtedly we should follow our culture or history because these play vital role in our life yet, we must understand that people have their own rights and they can do everything whatever they want according to their choice. However, as far as I concerned, government should make a law that externally building should be like a traditionally building and internally we could make or change our home according to our preference.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 360, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
... in those houses. For example, it plays a important role in our economy as well b...
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Line 5, column 252, Rule ID: FOR_FRO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'for'?
Suggestion: for
... culture for forever and It shows adore fro each other. For example, we have one pl...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, furthermore, however, if, look, second, secondly, so, well, whereas, for example, in addition, it is true, to start with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 46.0 24.0651302605 191% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1608.0 1615.20841683 100% => OK
No of words: 330.0 315.596192385 105% => OK
Chars per words: 4.87272727273 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.26214759535 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65670314965 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 189.0 176.041082164 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.572727272727 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 512.1 506.74238477 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 60.2846987051 49.4020404114 122% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.857142857 106.682146367 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.5714285714 20.7667163134 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.71428571429 7.06120827912 138% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.261774046949 0.244688304435 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0839799479667 0.084324248473 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0810944728602 0.0667982634062 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.160818998215 0.151304729494 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0479514626525 0.056905535591 84% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.26 12.4159519038 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.17 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 78.4519038076 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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