Some people think that newly built houses should follow the style of the old
houses in the local areas, while others think that people should have the freedom to
build houses of their own styles. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
While some people believe that new houses should be constructed in the same style as the traditional houses in the locality, others argue that everyone should be free to design and built their own house the way they prefer. I completely agree with the second group.
On the one hand, following the existing architectural styles of a local area will have a profound value in preserving the traditional and cultural identity. Buildings which have historical significance provide a link to our roots, traditional houses possess character and they give a strong sense of identity to local people. Moreover, a destination well- known for ancient beauty can attract tourists and boost the development of tourism, take Hoi An, which is one of the most famous ancient cities in Vietnam as an example. Local people in this city are encouraged to conserve old houses or to construct new buildings following traditional styles.
On the other hand, I believe that it is essential to welcome change and allow individuals to have the right to choose their own style for their house. Their right would be violated if they were forced to follow the style of old buildings which they do not feel comfortable. In terms of the building costs, the money spent on constructing a house in architectural style tend to be higher compared with their modern counterparts. Traditional materials like natural stones or wood are difficult to obtain and more expensive, these are not affordable for all people. Nowadays, these materials are replaced by some other materials such as concrete, which is available and suitable for people’s budgets.
In conclusion, although constructing houses in traditional style brings many advantageous benefits, I do believe that the owners should be allowed to decide the way their own house will be built.
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- Some people think that newly built houses should follow the style of the old houses in the local areas while others think that people should have the freedom to build houses of their own styles Discuss both views and give your own opinion 73
- Some people think that newly built houses should follow the style of the old houses in the local areas while others think that people should have freedom to build houses of their own styles Discuss both views and give your own opinion 73
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 450, Rule ID: THE_PUNCT[1]
Message: Did you forget something after 'An'?
...st the development of tourism, take Hoi An, which is one of the most famous ancient...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, moreover, second, so, well, while, in conclusion, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1527.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 297.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.14141414141 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.15134772569 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83019415936 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 164.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.552188552189 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 473.4 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.6933999602 49.4020404114 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 127.25 106.682146367 119% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.75 20.7667163134 119% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.66666666667 7.06120827912 94% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.382610300761 0.244688304435 156% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.134057367943 0.084324248473 159% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.111219494499 0.0667982634062 167% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.254129937336 0.151304729494 168% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0684775688924 0.056905535591 120% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.2 13.0946893788 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 50.2224549098 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.83 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.81 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 78.4519038076 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.