Some people thank that newly built houses should follow the style of the old houses in the local areas, while others think that people should have the freedom to build houses of their style. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
There are many arguments around newly built house models. Someone believes that new houses should be the same style with traditional houses and others content that should be free to choose their own styles of houses. I agree with the second statement that new houses should be built in modern styles.
On the one hand. building new houses follow the traditional styles that contribute to preserving the culture in the areas. Houses architecture is the strong sense of identity to the local characteristic, especially in the small villages or place where develop tourism through advertising culture and houses architecture. In addition, from an architectural perspective, modern houses alongside traditional dwellings are an eyesore.
On the other hand, changing house styles are welcome. In my opinion, there are two reasons why some individuals want to choose modern styles over traditional styles. Firstly, while only one model for building, people can choose any architecture for their houses if following new styles. Secondly, in modern life with the high-pressure in cost of living, building houses in traditional styles are far too expensive for their budget. Old construction materials, like natural stone from local quarries, are difficult to obtain and pretty expensive even if they are available while new construction materials are affordable. Besides, new house styles are usually designed minimalist, and their uses maximized. And therefore, it is easy to clean and repair as well as save money.
In conclusion, to saving money in modern life, built new houses should follow the modern styles.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 17, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Building
...ilt in modern styles. On the one hand. building new houses follow the traditional style...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, therefore, well, while, in addition, in conclusion, as well as, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 12.0 24.0651302605 50% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1359.0 1615.20841683 84% => OK
No of words: 251.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.41434262948 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98032404683 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82824192699 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 141.0 176.041082164 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.561752988048 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 431.1 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 48.4774403431 49.4020404114 98% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.6 106.682146367 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.7333333333 20.7667163134 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.1333333333 7.06120827912 144% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.400184774174 0.244688304435 164% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.140755970005 0.084324248473 167% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0823371394152 0.0667982634062 123% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.248875269268 0.151304729494 164% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0638966217654 0.056905535591 112% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 13.0946893788 95% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 46.78 50.2224549098 93% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.8 12.4159519038 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.71 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 78.4519038076 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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