Some people think that newly built houses should follow the style of old houses in local areas. Others think that people should have freedom to build houses of their own style. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
It is argued that the architectural style of new buildings should be the same as that of old buildings in local regions, while others believe that people are free to design their own houses the way they prefer. Personally, I favour the second group.
On the one hand, the primary reason why people think that shape of new houses should facsimile the style of the old ones in local areas is that this helps preserve traditional and cultural values, which can boost tourism in these areas. Take Hoi An as an example, where is one of the most famous accident city in VietNam. Local residents in there are encouraged keeping the origin houses or construct new houses in traditional architectural style. As a result, Hoi An has become a popular tourist destination that attracts millions of tourists on an annual basis.
On the other hand, I would argue that people have the right to make their decision when it comes to building their own houses. The first reason is that houses with different shapes and colours will create vivid images for the area and energetic atmosphere and that will help reduce stress for citizens after a hard day. Another cause that needs to be mentioned is cost. It would be much cheaper to build a modern simply house rather than one which has to mirror past architectural style.
In conclusion, although some people say that the design and construction of modern and traditional houses should be the same. I am convinced that the owners should be allowed to decide the shape of the house where they would live
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, second, so, while, as to, in conclusion, as a result, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 17.0 7.30460921844 233% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 41.998997996 67% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1276.0 1615.20841683 79% => OK
No of words: 268.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.76119402985 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.04607285448 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.44678265843 2.80592935109 87% => OK
Unique words: 149.0 176.041082164 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.555970149254 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 393.3 506.74238477 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 57.5012077168 49.4020404114 116% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.333333333 106.682146367 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.3333333333 20.7667163134 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.83333333333 7.06120827912 97% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.377357706524 0.244688304435 154% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.124021498919 0.084324248473 147% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.110262114381 0.0667982634062 165% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.231954550888 0.151304729494 153% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0444591620485 0.056905535591 78% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 13.0946893788 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 50.2224549098 115% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.62 12.4159519038 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.5 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 78.4519038076 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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