With the rapid development of science and technology, people can catch the latest news very fast by surfing the internet, buying weekday-newspaper or watching TV news every day. This way is becoming more populous in people's life because of helpfulness. In my opinion, I disagree with the point says that using these ways is wasting time and not interacting with people's life.
Firstly, reading newspapers or watching TV news is the most effective way to inform of the latest news over the world. It tells us about events are occurring around us, broadcast the weather, some furious accidents, and so on. Besides, it also gives us information about some recent development of researches, such as clone technology, genetic breakthroughs, the new computing technology,...etc. It not only gives information for inhabitants but it also stimulates the imagination of juveniles and encourages them to carry out relevant experiments, makes unique action and breakthroughs in their study.
Secondly, newspapers also have some contents that maybe can enlarge our knowledge of the scope such as the new invention, some real stories about heroes who help the people get in trouble, some lessons about life. These contents can be useful for you on a certain day. By learning those, the youth can know how to overcome a difficulty, the ability to tackle, moreover, it initiates their aspiration to know about the world around them, and inspire their interest in some jobs.
However, there are some rubbish newspapers or program about news sometimes play a negative role in the public. The shots about propaganda's harmful idea, unrealistic events, defrauding information, and also the news that covers pornographic advertisements. These can make the reader, especially, the young can walk on the criminal road.
To sum up, I disagree with the evaluation of the threads, reading newspapers and watching TV news are helpful to everyone. But meanwhile, the government and our society should do the utmost to prohibit unhealthy contents on TV and provide more clean programs about news to increase our knowledge.
- Some say that reading newspapers and watching TV news is a waste of time because it has no direct connection with people s lives To what extent do you agree or disagree 70
- Some people think the news has no connection to people s lives so it is a waste of time to read the news in the newspaper and watch television news programmes To what extent do you agree or disagree 92
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...and not interacting with peoples life. Firstly, reading newspapers or watching ...
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Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , .
...akthroughs, the new computing technology,...etc. It not only gives information for...
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Message: Use simply 'invention'.
Suggestion: invention
... our knowledge of the scope such as the new invention, some real stories about heroes who hel...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, first, firstly, however, if, may, moreover, second, secondly, so, while, such as, in my opinion, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1775.0 1615.20841683 110% => OK
No of words: 336.0 315.596192385 106% => OK
Chars per words: 5.28273809524 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.28139028586 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.98828346732 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 196.0 176.041082164 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.583333333333 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 543.6 506.74238477 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 4.0 0.809619238477 494% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.3551674821 49.4020404114 98% => OK
Chars per sentence: 118.333333333 106.682146367 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.4 20.7667163134 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.4 7.06120827912 119% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.27653745253 0.244688304435 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0938201326547 0.084324248473 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0807777985369 0.0667982634062 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.153734944787 0.151304729494 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0554269224522 0.056905535591 97% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.6 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.64 12.4159519038 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.15 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 94.0 78.4519038076 120% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.