Some people think that the news media has become much more influential in people’s lives today and it is a negative development. Do you agree or disagree?
It is a common belief that broadcast journalism has a significant role that impacts citizens, and this is also a detrimental expansion. From my perspective, I firmly believe that the negative influences of the news media outweigh the positive for several reasons.
First of all, too much information causes people to lose their ability to judge the topic's accuracy. In other words, people will misunderstand many parts of life as a result of this, and they will be less likely to inquire about the information they receive on a daily basis. For example, some unreliable online newspapers have a tendency to use dramatic titles with the intention of gaining more viewers. That’s why it is more important to learn the way we behave on the internet.
Secondly, new broadcasting spreads malicious content, so this fuels feelings of anxiety, depression, and isolation, especially for teens. Recently, the MV of Son Tùng MTP had to be deleted because of its toxic content, which can easily have a bad impact on many teenagers. The "school depression" and parents' parenting methods were discussed by the public.
To summarise, nowadays, citizens are greatly fond of broadcast media. It cannot be denied that some unfaithful writings or speeches are guiding many people incorrectly. Attachment with knowledge drives many individuals to use their senses.
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- Some people think that the news media has become much more influential in people s lives today and it is a negative development Do you agree or disagree 63
- Some people think that the news media has become much more influential in people s lives today and it is a negative development Do you agree or disagree 56
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 85, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'topics'' or 'topic's'?
Suggestion: topics'; topic's
...ople to lose their ability to judge the topics accuracy. In other words, people will m...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, if, second, secondly, so, for example, as a result, first of all, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 41.998997996 62% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1151.0 1615.20841683 71% => OK
No of words: 217.0 315.596192385 69% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.30414746544 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.8380880478 4.20363070211 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.98889049894 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 152.0 176.041082164 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.700460829493 0.561755894193 125% => OK
syllable_count: 357.3 506.74238477 71% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 4.0 0.809619238477 494% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 31.064449134 49.4020404114 63% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.9166666667 106.682146367 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.0833333333 20.7667163134 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.75 7.06120827912 110% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.133084043371 0.244688304435 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.042746414119 0.084324248473 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0425306214558 0.0667982634062 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0722990480518 0.151304729494 48% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0458076632233 0.056905535591 80% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 13.0946893788 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.16 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.99 8.58950901804 116% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 78.4519038076 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.