some people think newspaper is the most effective way to obtain the latest information because it has more influence than other forms of media.
Numerous people believe that one of the best ways to derive the newest information is by reading newspaper. In comparing to other media forms, newspaper has more impact. In my perspective, the better way to receive the recent information is not only by reading newspaper but also by using other media forms. This essay will explain further information about my perspectives.
First and foremost, another media form that is able to make people acquiring the latest information is by having gadget. In this modern era, gadget is one of the primary necessities for people. Moreover, it has countless functions which are capable of helping people to finish their various activities such as assisting people to derive several new knowledges which they need and additionally, aiding people connected to their relatives or other people.
Second but not less crucial is television, it is one of the other media forms which is are capable of helping people to derive countless news. In particular, the people who like to watch television frequently. They are able to receive various intelligences by watching news and films on television.
Even though, there are other media forms which can aid people to get overwhelming knowledges, newspaper still has its own role to help people. Typically, the people who are unable to use gadget and television.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, moreover, second, so, still, in particular, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1134.0 1615.20841683 70% => OK
No of words: 218.0 315.596192385 69% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.20183486239 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.84250218741 4.20363070211 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80061556113 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 122.0 176.041082164 69% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.559633027523 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 357.3 506.74238477 71% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 54.1764093802 49.4020404114 110% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.5 106.682146367 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.1666666667 20.7667163134 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.75 7.06120827912 81% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.279973141157 0.244688304435 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.107116568814 0.084324248473 127% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0769376285343 0.0667982634062 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.171131026408 0.151304729494 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0532749280154 0.056905535591 94% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.58 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.22 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 51.0 78.4519038076 65% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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