Some people think newspaper is the most effective way to obtain the latest information because it has more influence than other forms of media. Do you agree or disagree?
In recent day, information is delivered in various form such as printed and electronic modes. Many people assume that printed-newspaper is the most effective method to get hold of up to date information and extremely influence compares to other types of media.
I strongly disagree that the newspaper is the best option to get current information.
The advance of communication technology such as the invention of smart-phone has completely changed people behaviour, especially in term of acquiring information. For instance, despite reading a printed-newsletter, people prefer to use a device to access electronic news such as Jakarta Post, The Guardian, and other news websites. Beside handy and convenient, this method is saving much time since people could search for the intended-news which they are looking for. Moreover, the amount of information provided by electronic media forms is abundance, therefore it could meet the people need. In addition, the information provided by electronic media forms are more up to date compares to printed-media form since the publisher need no extra time in term of printing and distributing process.
The printed-newspaper is seen as one of a contributor to environmental damage because of using paper as basic material. Furthermore, out of date newspapers rarely use for other purposes and it becomes a pile of garbage that could lead to environmental pollution and ruining the scenery.
In conclusion, I consider that the newspaper is not the best way to get the newest information because there are other forms of media provided the fastest and cheapest information.
- The graph below shows the proportion of the population aged 65 and over between 1940 and 2040 in three different countries. 11
- Some people think it would be a good idea for schools to teach every young person how to be a good parent. Do you agree or disagree with this opinion? Describe the skills a person needs to be a good parent. 56
- some parents buy their children a large number of toys to play with. what are the advantages and the diadvantages for the child of having a large number of toys? 78
- The charts below illustrate the average bed use in three typical hospitals internationally and the proportion of hospital budgets allocated to in patient care before and after day surgery was introduced in 2003 68
- More and more people are suffering from health problems caused by a modern lifestyle which can not be treated with modern medicines. Some people think that a return to traditional medicine should be encouraged. To what extent do you agree? 73
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 9, column 182, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...d the fastest and cheapest information.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, look, moreover, therefore, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 10.0 24.0651302605 42% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 8.3376753507 192% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1373.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 253.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.42687747036 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98822939669 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.3187367558 2.80592935109 118% => OK
Unique words: 137.0 176.041082164 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.541501976285 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 438.3 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.7726975639 49.4020404114 70% => OK
Chars per sentence: 124.818181818 106.682146367 117% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.0 20.7667163134 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.54545454545 7.06120827912 121% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.67935871743 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.269033824317 0.244688304435 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.10553079664 0.084324248473 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0755251804226 0.0667982634062 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.157445777925 0.151304729494 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0702843743123 0.056905535591 124% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.6 13.0946893788 119% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.67 50.2224549098 79% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.51 12.4159519038 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.52 8.58950901804 111% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 78.4519038076 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 9.78957915832 133% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.