some people think newspaper is the most effective way to obtain the latest information because it has more influence than other forms of media.
In comparing to other media forms, newspaper will render more impact rather than others and it is believed by numerous people who believed that one of the effective ways to derive the newest information is by reading newspaper. In according to this issue, I am going to present my perspectives in the following paragraphs.
I do appreciate of an argument which believed that in order to obtain recent information, individuals are able to acquire it by reading newspaper. Nevertheless, I do believe that there are other media forms which are capable of doing the same things. First and foremost, another media form that is able to make people acquiring the latest information is by having gadget. In this temporary era, gadget is one of the primary necessities for people. Moreover, it has countless functions which are capable of helping people to finish their various activities such as assisting people to derive several new knowledges which they need and additionally, aiding people connected to their relatives or other people.
Second but not less crucial is television, it is one of the other media forms which are capable of helping people to derive countless news. In particular, the people who like to watch television frequently. Furthermore, they, all individuals, were able to receive various intelligences by watching news and films on television.
By way of conclusion, By having all of these media forms, I believe that People are rapidly able to have the newest and recent fact about everything that happened in the world. Therefore, in order to make us be updated of all information, we would rather have all of those tools.
- Bar Chart : The chart below shows the percentage of people who ate five portions of fruit and vegetables per day in the UK from 2001 to 2008. 78
- Bar chart : amount spent on consumer goods (Belgium, Spain, Austria and Britain) 78
- Children today are too dependent on computer and electronic entertainment. It would be better for them to be outside playing sports and taking part in more traditional pastime than spending all day indoors. 78
- The line graph below shows the money spent on books in Germany, France, Italy and Austria. 78
- some people think newspaper is the most effective way to obtain the latest information because it has more influence than other forms of media. 56
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, furthermore, moreover, nevertheless, second, therefore, in particular, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1380.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 271.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.09225092251 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.05734859645 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.87139884123 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 145.0 176.041082164 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.535055350554 0.561755894193 95% => OK
syllable_count: 442.8 506.74238477 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 56.4645291803 49.4020404114 114% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.0 106.682146367 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.5833333333 20.7667163134 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.5 7.06120827912 106% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.247391791036 0.244688304435 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0846591494944 0.084324248473 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0897971561674 0.0667982634062 134% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.144812513605 0.151304729494 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0717320592053 0.056905535591 126% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.8 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.54 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.34 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 78.4519038076 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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