Some people think that newspapers are the best media to learn and get information from, while others believe that the Internet is a better source. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
In the modern era, technologies are growing faster with time. People are using new advanced technologies. Few folks consider that the newspaper and magazine are the best way to acquire information. And another side several believe that the internet is a better option for that. In this essay, I would debate on the above two disparate ideology and the end of that I'll give my opinion.
There are lots of benefits of reading newspapers, magazines like you can improve reading skill as well as grammar, vocabularies. Other benefits, we can correction in language. Having breaking time, an employee can relax and enjoy their free time in the cafeteria with newspapers and magazines. We cannot get any emergency news by the press. Some of the newspaper companies are working by a political party. That’s newspaper always shows to true news about this party. For instance, recently activated incident in Pulwama our 44 CRPF soldiers was murder by a terrorist. The local Gujarati newspaper Gujarat Samachar which written headline was cowardly of 56 inches chest: a terrorist is openly walking: 44 Jawan martyr.
People gets high-speed internet with cheaper and without any difficulty as well as sustainable. Because of that, they can easily watch the news on YouTube, news websites, social media, and any other platforms. You can hear the news as soon as the incident happens. For example, the terrorist attack on the world trade center in the USA by the Taliban. That news were spread in within few minutes overall world. On YouTube people could also find older news related to their preference like sports, political news, social, laws, entertainment, business and many more.
In conclusion, after the discussion on both views my opinion that the internet is more suitable for getting a piece of information about any event.
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...a piece of information about any event.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, so, well, for example, for instance, in conclusion, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1545.0 1615.20841683 96% => OK
No of words: 299.0 315.596192385 95% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.16722408027 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1583189471 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67915731458 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 191.0 176.041082164 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.638795986622 0.561755894193 114% => OK
syllable_count: 485.1 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 16.0721442886 124% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.2975951904 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 35.0275248911 49.4020404114 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 77.25 106.682146367 72% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.95 20.7667163134 72% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.6 7.06120827912 51% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.185803573918 0.244688304435 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.048761504138 0.084324248473 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0527932024059 0.0667982634062 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.125899327602 0.151304729494 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0623375194579 0.056905535591 110% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.4 13.0946893788 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 57.27 50.2224549098 114% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.8 11.3001002004 78% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.11 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.93 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 87.0 78.4519038076 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 9.78957915832 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.1190380762 75% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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