Some people think that newspapers are the best way to learn news. However, others believe that they can learn news more effectively through other media. Discuss both views and give your opinion?
In the world of growing advanced technology, the role of newspapers as the best means of transferring information has provoked considerable controversy. While some people still support this opinion, others have found other media more useful to obtain information. thus, this essay is going to weigh up pros and cons of both sides, then showing my perspectives on the matter.
To begin with, there is no room for doubt that newspapers have long been a widely popular news channel for their reliability. The information on newspaper are likely to be verified carefully before being published so as to minimize the risk of faulty news that would possibly ruin the reputation of the publishers. The checking process with various steps and people involved will investigate the authenticity of sources of news, the writing style of articles, relevant illustrative images and so on. thus, it may take more time, making newspaper less up-to-date than other digital media, which can immediately spread news when they happen.
On the other hand, there are many other types of media emerging in the modern life, especially, social media, which are claimed to be the fastest growing in popularity. Since social networking sites are sharing platforms, users can post any news they encounter in their daily life at the click of the mouse, thus making social media a fertile source of news. due to their ease to use, the news can be spread easily and widely at an astonishing speed. For example, Facebook is now becoming one of the most effective way to get information thanks to its billions of users, or in other words, billions of amateur “journalists”. However, due to the lack of verification, the news on social media may be manipulated for several personal benefits. More seriously, some distorted news can even trigger adverse effects or great losses to the society.
By considering both views, it is reasonable to state that every media has its own advantages and disadvantages. thus, from my point of view, news learners should smartly utilize all media at their disposal by making best use of the strong points and overcoming the drawbacks of each channel. For example, they should use social media to stay updated but still remain conscious by checking the news again on newspaper to prove its authenticity. By using media effectively, people can obviously become more knowledgeable and up-to-date.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, may, so, still, then, thus, while, as to, for example, in other words, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 63.0 41.998997996 150% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2028.0 1615.20841683 126% => OK
No of words: 393.0 315.596192385 125% => OK
Chars per words: 5.16030534351 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.45244063426 4.20363070211 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.91519111854 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 230.0 176.041082164 131% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.58524173028 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 635.4 506.74238477 125% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.0815165403 49.4020404114 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 119.294117647 106.682146367 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.1176470588 20.7667163134 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.11764705882 7.06120827912 101% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.34228410832 0.244688304435 140% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.106002562261 0.084324248473 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0558833208042 0.0667982634062 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.202572466706 0.151304729494 134% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0285100088691 0.056905535591 50% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.4 13.0946893788 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.94 12.4159519038 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.04 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 106.0 78.4519038076 135% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.