Some people think that only the government can make significant changes in society, while others think that individuals can have a lot of influence. What is your opinion?
Nowadays, creating some fundamental changes in society is one of the most prominent challenges for majority of people and governments in all over the world. Hence, there are numerous of considerable debates among social experts about the quota of governments and people in this phenomenon.
Some social researchers believe that governments can allocate budget for industrial and commercial developments and because of that they are the burden of essential changes in society. According to G8 group countries reports more than three forth of changes are predicted in annual budget in these countries. Comprehensive researches in victorious countries illustrated that governmental organizations should accomplish all strategies which are devised in their scheduled plan. These researchers are unanimous in importance of distinguish some particular indicators in countries to evaluate amount of developments in comparison with predicted plans. Actually, these criteria shows governments` annual performance undoubtedly.
On the other hand, some other social experts argue that people`s responsibility in creating beneficial and appropriate changes is more than governments. They emphasize that all developments are the results of people`s motivation and collaboration to fulfill them. In these experts` opinion, individual and social growth in the society causes to increasing people`s comprehend from developments and changes. Actually, when people understand the importance of profitable changes in their life, they will participate in all types of improvements to achieve best results in their society. Recent investigations in U.S. companies revealed that the number of innovative suggestions to eliminate or diminish some basic issues in them increased more than 30% during recent decade. It shows that people in this country are motivated to make some effective decisions in society.
In conclusion, the importance of new developments is undeniable for majority of people. In my point of view in first step of any development governments should devise some strategic plans to alter people`s lifestyle. I think in this way all people are responsible because without their accompaniment and agreement all changes are unprofitable and unsuitable.
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| 2019-04-20 | Prabhjot Sanghera | 69 | view |
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, first, hence, if, so, i think, in conclusion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 58.0 41.998997996 138% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1955.0 1615.20841683 121% => OK
No of words: 327.0 315.596192385 104% => OK
Chars per words: 5.97859327217 5.12529762239 117% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.25242769721 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.37933634737 2.80592935109 120% => OK
Unique words: 176.0 176.041082164 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.538226299694 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 611.1 506.74238477 121% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.9 1.60771543086 118% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 32.9675503336 49.4020404114 67% => OK
Chars per sentence: 122.1875 106.682146367 115% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.4375 20.7667163134 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.5625 7.06120827912 65% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.21068918961 0.244688304435 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0684945075355 0.084324248473 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0511068604715 0.0667982634062 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.123734166842 0.151304729494 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0215318836734 0.056905535591 38% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.0 13.0946893788 130% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 25.8 50.2224549098 51% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 11.3001002004 129% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 17.4 12.4159519038 140% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.65 8.58950901804 112% => OK
difficult_words: 104.0 78.4519038076 133% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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