Some people think parents should read or tell stories to their children. Others think parents need not to do that as children can read books or watch TV, movies by themselves. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
It is true that, reading stories from books is always worthwhile for offsprings since books are the great source of knowledge. Some proportion of masses advocate that, birth givers should come up with such tendency in order to tell stories to their own kids yet other individuals have conflicting views in regards to this trend. This essay intends to not only examine both sides but also discuss my view point in the upcoming paragraphs of this notion.
Setting wheel to the motion, there are manifold points the proponents of the former view have to support their assign assertion. First and foremost, if stories are told by birth givers to their kid on regular basis, child would go through the process of brain storming. To demonstrate, as in the initial stage of life toddler is unable to even think about what is the purpose of the this story; however, all the queries of child can be sorted out; therefore, it enables the child to empower their brain- based skills , and thinking ability as well. Besides it, the another considerable point is to mention is that, why stories should be told by parents because on televisions misleading programs are telecasted . In other words, there are ample of violent programs namely car racing, bad news content and such like. Consequently, it leads to reckless behavior , along with it, kids tend to choose wrong way in their life due the influence of these type on content. What is more, child can easily understand the stories because majority of birth givers tell stories in their mother language as well as offsprings are able to to quality time with their parents. As a result, it reduces generation gap among both.
Yet, on the flip side supporters of the later view have numerous points to back their statement which was given by them. Principally, needless to say, time in invaluable, so it saves time of parents. To elaborate it, masses have hectic schedule they remain as busy as bee to make themselves wealthy, if children read stories from their books rather than listening from parents this part of time can be utilized in office work. As a consequence, parents can make their career far better. Furthermore, child start to feel bore after a some time when they listen story from birth givers; however, on television several interesting facts are shown with visual impacts. Hence, child gets bound with study for long hours.
To recapitulate, although both the ways of story telling have their own significance, I believe stories have to tell by birth givers as child gets attached with their parents.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, consequently, first, furthermore, hence, however, if, so, therefore, well, while, as a result, as well as, in other words, it is true, what is more
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 35.0 24.0651302605 145% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 74.0 41.998997996 176% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2135.0 1615.20841683 132% => OK
No of words: 434.0 315.596192385 138% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.91935483871 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.56428161445 4.20363070211 109% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.493943252 2.80592935109 89% => OK
Unique words: 247.0 176.041082164 140% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.569124423963 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 642.6 506.74238477 127% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 2.10420841683 285% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 60.2976413764 49.4020404114 122% => OK
Chars per sentence: 118.611111111 106.682146367 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.1111111111 20.7667163134 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.27777777778 7.06120827912 131% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 5.01903807615 199% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.25220300037 0.244688304435 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0712485168848 0.084324248473 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0513135340101 0.0667982634062 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.153448716621 0.151304729494 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0188757165553 0.056905535591 33% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.8 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.58 50.2224549098 111% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.55 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.47 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 100.0 78.4519038076 127% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 9.78957915832 133% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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