There is an opinion among some people that children should be teached how to be a valuable part of society in their families, in contrast others say that it is better to learn this at school. I think, that the main factor that makes a person a good citizen is their family, however school also plays a major role in this.
Parents educate their children since they are born, thus the most important aspects of their personality form in childhood. If a child is raised in a non-healthy family, or their parent's don't pay enough attention to their child's personal growth,the baby is more likely to become a criminal in the future, than one raised by caring and attentive parents. Recently, there was a boy in news who had robbed a poor granny. The reporters had a small interview with him,during which he confessed that his father made him do it.
However, even a perfectly educated child might be spoiled, if they are not treated properly at school. Children tend to learn more from their classmates, than from teachers, that it why schools have to make sure that everyone in the group is educated well and willing to become good members of society in the future.
In my opinion, the perfect scenario would be learning the basics, like being kind and not throwing garbage, at home and receiving more advanced education, which will include practice, at schools. For instance, taking part in community work and volunteering in social events.
In sum, the treatments a child gets at home and at school are equally important. Parents should educate them about simple
ways to be a good member of society, while schools ought to deepen this knowledge and make sure children ingage in actual social activities.
- For centuries, important parts of education have remained such as reading, writing and maths. With the advent of computers, some people think that computer skill be made as a fourth skill to be added to the list. To what extent do you agree? 84
- Some people think that parents should teach children how to be good members of society. Others, however, believe that school is the place to learn this.Discuss both these views and give your own opinion. 73
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, so, thus, well, while, for instance, i think, in contrast, in fact, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1414.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 294.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.80952380952 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14082457966 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.49024195849 2.80592935109 89% => OK
Unique words: 179.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.608843537415 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 433.8 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 55.8201476968 49.4020404114 113% => OK
Chars per sentence: 117.833333333 106.682146367 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.5 20.7667163134 118% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.33333333333 7.06120827912 118% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.38176352705 137% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.241382313453 0.244688304435 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0824875063541 0.084324248473 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0889635544102 0.0667982634062 133% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.13180846194 0.151304729494 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0886311905208 0.056905535591 156% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 13.0946893788 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.58 50.2224549098 111% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.91 12.4159519038 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.53 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 78.4519038076 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 9.78957915832 133% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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