Some people think that parents should teach children how to be good members of society. Others, believe that school is the place to learn this.
There are split opinion regarding development of the toddler. Some believed that parents should educate their kid to be a well-being towards the public. While another group of thinkers support that school is the best platform for learn this. However, both has it's own pros and cons. Therefore before commenting on my decision, both the viewpoint would be discussed.
Examining the former view,the primary argument supporters would put forward is guardian should teach their children to be a well discipline, this is because youngster can be a good person by learning discipline from their parents. Children always obey their mother and father, and they easily get knowledge from them. Also, individual have their responsibility to learn good manner and respect for other community. Parents are not only source for learning such things, but guardian can play a effective role in peoples life.
However, once a child goes to a school, teacher also play a vital role. In order to be a good person, at school children will experience working and living with people from a different backgrounds of wider society. This experience not only teach them how to co-operate with each other, but also inspired how to contribute to the life of their community.
To conclude, to be a valuable member of any community is not like learning a simple skills. It is something that an individual goes on learning through life and it is the responsibility of every member of society, for helping the younger generation to become active and able person of society.
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- Some people that it is best to accept a bad situation such as an unsatisfactory job or shortage of money others argue that it is better to try and improve such situation Discuss both the view and give your opinion 56
- Some people that it is best to accept a bad situation such as an unsatisfactory job or shortage of money others argue that it is better to try and improve such situation Discuss both the view and give your opinion 61
- Some people think that parents should teach children how to be good members of society Others believe that school is the place to learn this 61
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: Therefore,
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Suggestion: an
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Suggestion: background
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Suggestion:
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Suggestion: skill
...ommunity is not like learning a simple skills. It is something that an individual goe...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, regarding, so, therefore, well, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1296.0 1615.20841683 80% => OK
No of words: 255.0 315.596192385 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.08235294118 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.99608801488 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70415972447 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 154.0 176.041082164 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.603921568627 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 396.0 506.74238477 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.7529028023 49.4020404114 103% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.5714285714 106.682146367 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.2142857143 20.7667163134 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.35714285714 7.06120827912 62% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.351342492422 0.244688304435 144% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0997304796485 0.084324248473 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.071766209831 0.0667982634062 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.189224733957 0.151304729494 125% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0459335461521 0.056905535591 81% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 13.0946893788 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.18 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.31 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 78.4519038076 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.