Some people that it is best to accept a bad situation such as an unsatisfactory job or shortage of money others argue that it is better to try and improve such situation.
Discuss both the view and give your opinion.
The some individual group think that accept the unpreferable choices in the particular situation, while other think that improve for creating the better situation. In my opinion, it is good for people to improve their ability and creates the choiceable environment.
There are some social and technical problems available for diverting the people into this situation. In the socially, the major number of people living in society having negative approach. Nowadays, people having too much pressure regarding family and working environment for that people have to accept unpreferable duty or job. Also, unemployment affect the people to work into the unpreferable environment. However, people have to accept bad situation sometime to achieve something actually they wanted.
On the other hand, improvement is best way to be successful person rather than just stick with one position. It is important to update yourself with the new technology and lifestyle. It will help us to be smarter towards the works and knowledge. As per my opinion, people could learn sone extra skills for creating a good future and it will help to achived preferred situation. Furthermore, people have to do research for reason behind their unsatisfaction and failure.
In the end, it is not fair to think that people have to sacrifies their choices, while it can be improve by doing some extra efforts.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 5, Rule ID: THE_SOME_DAY[1]
Message: Did you mean 'same'?
Suggestion: same
The some individual group think that accept the ...
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Line 4, column 32, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[4]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'is the best'.
Suggestion: is the best
...nted. On the other hand, improvement is best way to be successful person rather than...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, furthermore, however, if, regarding, so, while, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 41.998997996 62% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1165.0 1615.20841683 72% => OK
No of words: 221.0 315.596192385 70% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.27149321267 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.85565412703 4.20363070211 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79518637849 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 130.0 176.041082164 74% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.588235294118 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 364.5 506.74238477 72% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 27.9830887223 49.4020404114 57% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 89.6153846154 106.682146367 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.0 20.7667163134 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.38461538462 7.06120827912 105% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.176975942764 0.244688304435 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0626916218662 0.084324248473 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0437782611778 0.0667982634062 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.10737958559 0.151304729494 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0334250085709 0.056905535591 59% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 13.0946893788 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.99 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.19 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 52.0 78.4519038076 66% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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