Children plays an important role in society. Some people think young one learn good behaviour from parents but others prefer that school is a good platform to learn this. I will discussed my opinion in upcoming paragraphs.
To embark with, there are many things that kinders learn from caretaker. The major thing is good behaviour. All guardins always tried to teach good behaviour because if any kinder talk with people in best manner so, they can be able to a best member of society. A survey conducted in 2015 and government find 80% children learn manners to guardians. In addition, in childhood the new born mind work sharply and caught anything very easily so, the caretaker tried to give best knowledge to little one and it become to be a good member of the public.
On the other hand, school is very cruical to students. In schools teachers also tech good knowledge to students like our enviroment because if students learn this things in schools so, they can work for their society. Moreover, schools give best education, because schools hire knowledgable tutor for youngester so, the adults get job in future, if new born take best education.
In conclusion, young boy take good technique from parents but educator also play a cruical role in new born life so, i think guardians should be educate children to be a fine arms of the public.
- Some people think that parents should teach children how to be good members of society Others however believe that school is the place to learn this Discuss both views and give your own opinion 56
- Some people think that parents should teach children how to be good members of society Others however believe that school is the place to learn this Discuss both views and give your own opinion 54
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: give the best
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, moreover, so, i think, in addition, in conclusion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 12.0 24.0651302605 50% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1125.0 1615.20841683 70% => OK
No of words: 233.0 315.596192385 74% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.82832618026 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.90696013833 4.20363070211 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.47076889371 2.80592935109 88% => OK
Unique words: 132.0 176.041082164 75% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.56652360515 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 331.2 506.74238477 65% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 58.4224913882 49.4020404114 118% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.75 106.682146367 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.4166666667 20.7667163134 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.91666666667 7.06120827912 98% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 5.01903807615 219% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.285785370714 0.244688304435 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.101182526577 0.084324248473 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0737119075671 0.0667982634062 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.18503824479 0.151304729494 122% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.079605376763 0.056905535591 140% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.0 13.0946893788 84% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 69.11 50.2224549098 138% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 11.3001002004 73% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.73 12.4159519038 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.7 8.58950901804 90% => OK
difficult_words: 46.0 78.4519038076 59% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 9.78957915832 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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