Good communication skill and good behaviour plays an important role in community. Few masses believe that guardian ought to teach kinder how to be good members of society, whereas other individuals think school is the place to became good members of civilization. I will discussed both views and my opinion in the ensuring paragraphs.
To commence with, the former argument is that childrens should teach by their parents because guardians is the first teacher of kinders. All parents want that their children become good person, so they teach good way their childrens. A survey conducted by social worker and observed that in the world 80% children has a good members of society because they teach by their parents. In addition, children spend mostly time with parents so they easily gain good thinks for their parents. A study reveal that in the world those children teach by their parents they become good member of community as compare to those children learn in school.
On the other hand, in school children learn how to cooperate with other and how to share thing. A survey conduct by authority and observed that the in the world 85% kinders become good member of community because they learn in school. A part from that in school teachers know how to teach children because they have a lot of knowledge and they are educated person so they easily teach kinders and help to become a good member of society.
In conclusion, children teach by their parents is better rather than in they learn in school because in children life first tutor is their caretaker and they mostly spend time with guardians.
- Some people think that parents should teach children how to be good members of society Others however believe that school is the place to learn this Discuss both views and give your own opinion 54
- Some people think that parents should teach children how to be good members of society Others however believe that school is the place to learn this Discuss both views and give your own opinion 56
Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 272, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'will' requires the base form of the verb: 'discuss'
Suggestion: discuss
...me good members of civilization. I will discussed both views and my opinion in the ensuri...
^^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 326, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'member'?
Suggestion: member
...at in the world 80% children has a good members of society because they teach by their ...
^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 494, Rule ID: MASS_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Possible agreement error - use third-person verb forms for singular and mass nouns: 'reveals'.
Suggestion: reveals
... good thinks for their parents. A study reveal that in the world those children teach ...
^^^^^^
Line 5, column 106, Rule ID: MASS_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Possible agreement error - use third-person verb forms for singular and mass nouns: 'conducts'.
Suggestion: conducts
... other and how to share thing. A survey conduct by authority and observed that the in t...
^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, so, whereas, in addition, in conclusion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1346.0 1615.20841683 83% => OK
No of words: 274.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.91240875912 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0685311056 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.40449744658 2.80592935109 86% => OK
Unique words: 125.0 176.041082164 71% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.456204379562 0.561755894193 81% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 386.1 506.74238477 76% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.2459728521 49.4020404114 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.166666667 106.682146367 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.8333333333 20.7667163134 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.75 7.06120827912 81% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.348621985422 0.244688304435 142% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.154101994502 0.084324248473 183% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0629488714332 0.0667982634062 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.22790518862 0.151304729494 151% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0759686126923 0.056905535591 133% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 13.0946893788 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 66.07 50.2224549098 132% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.49 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.44 8.58950901804 87% => OK
difficult_words: 47.0 78.4519038076 60% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 272, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'will' requires the base form of the verb: 'discuss'
Suggestion: discuss
...me good members of civilization. I will discussed both views and my opinion in the ensuri...
^^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 326, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'member'?
Suggestion: member
...at in the world 80% children has a good members of society because they teach by their ...
^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 494, Rule ID: MASS_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Possible agreement error - use third-person verb forms for singular and mass nouns: 'reveals'.
Suggestion: reveals
... good thinks for their parents. A study reveal that in the world those children teach ...
^^^^^^
Line 5, column 106, Rule ID: MASS_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Possible agreement error - use third-person verb forms for singular and mass nouns: 'conducts'.
Suggestion: conducts
... other and how to share thing. A survey conduct by authority and observed that the in t...
^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, so, whereas, in addition, in conclusion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1346.0 1615.20841683 83% => OK
No of words: 274.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.91240875912 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0685311056 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.40449744658 2.80592935109 86% => OK
Unique words: 125.0 176.041082164 71% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.456204379562 0.561755894193 81% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 386.1 506.74238477 76% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.2459728521 49.4020404114 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.166666667 106.682146367 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.8333333333 20.7667163134 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.75 7.06120827912 81% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.348621985422 0.244688304435 142% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.154101994502 0.084324248473 183% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0629488714332 0.0667982634062 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.22790518862 0.151304729494 151% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0759686126923 0.056905535591 133% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 13.0946893788 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 66.07 50.2224549098 132% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.49 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.44 8.58950901804 87% => OK
difficult_words: 47.0 78.4519038076 60% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.