some people think that parents should teach children how to be good members of society. Other, however, believe that school is the palace to learn this.
As society has developed , there are different opinions about they ways to teach children so that they can contributes their part and become good members of society. Some people think that parents should be leading from the front but other people think that school are the best place for teaching children. However, in my point of view parents should consider this as their reponsibility instead of relying on the school to do this job.
On one hand, parents are the first teacher and home is the first school where children are taught life lessons.chidren learn about love, empathy, kindness and socially acceptable behaviour at home. In addition, chidren should also be taught about social responsibilitie, helping the needy people of the community such as the poor, the elderly,... moreover because of knowing their kids the most so parents are able to teach their kids easily and effectively.
On the other hand, school are place where chidren are taught skill on various subjects that help them to be self- reliant and that will be useful for them in the future. this will also empower them to contribite towards society by using their skill.For examble, educated chidren may help to teach the illiterate members the alphabets, how to read and write,..Thus i believe that, home is the best place to teach chidren and parents are the excellent teachers in raising their kids.Obviously, when chidren get such education skills they will become a helpful members in the future.
In conclusion, home and parents are the most effective method in teaching chidren to be good member of society and also at school than at school.
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- some people think that parents should teach children how to be good members of society Other however believe that school is the palace to learn this 63
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, may, moreover, so, thus, in addition, in conclusion, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1357.0 1615.20841683 84% => OK
No of words: 271.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.0073800738 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.05734859645 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.59148932728 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 139.0 176.041082164 79% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.512915129151 0.561755894193 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 405.0 506.74238477 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 16.0721442886 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 30.0 20.2975951904 148% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 84.725846917 49.4020404114 172% => OK
Chars per sentence: 150.777777778 106.682146367 141% => OK
Words per sentence: 30.1111111111 20.7667163134 145% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.2222222222 7.06120827912 173% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 17.0 5.01903807615 339% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.38742214246 0.244688304435 158% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.164635590629 0.084324248473 195% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.10738632566 0.0667982634062 161% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.247530837324 0.151304729494 164% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.115212209216 0.056905535591 202% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.2 13.0946893788 131% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.49 50.2224549098 99% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.37 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.15 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 52.0 78.4519038076 66% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.0 10.1190380762 138% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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