Schools are known as the temple of knowledge and some people believe that school is the best place to learn moral values, but in my opinion parents should be the teachers of moral values and not rely on the schools to this job for them, there are numerous reasons for this explained in the upcoming paragraph.
To Begin with, School is the place where we make our first group of friends and friends are the initial influencers for any kind of behavior so choosing our first set of friends is wisely is very imperative in order to make us good human beings, So initial foundation of humanity is always laid by our parents which will lead us in making right choices in life, Secondly a teacher can be best in teaching an academic lesson but learning moral values is a bonus lesson for a student from a teacher at school since the priority here is mostly knowledge, Further more, children spend most of the time with parents when compared to friends or teachers and youngsters are excellent observers and keenly observe whom ever they are with.
Educational institutions teach kids how to behave around different groups of people and also teach them ideal discipline in life, but when it comes to morality young off springs always tend to mimic their parents since most of the time they are around them and are dependent on them for basic lessons of life. On the other hand, teachers hardly spend any time with their students individually, So even if they want to educate students about integrity its general lessons to the entire classroom whereas every individual is unique and acts uniquely to any situation.
To Surmise, Parents should spend a substantial amount of time teaching integrity to their kids in the initial days of their up bringing, They should also become a role model for their kids as they are the rudimentary mentors for their kids and depending upon schools for teaching moral values is always considered as a gamble during raising their children right.
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Essay evaluations by e-grader
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, second, secondly, so, whereas, kind of, in my opinion, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 52.0 41.998997996 124% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1634.0 1615.20841683 101% => OK
No of words: 342.0 315.596192385 108% => OK
Chars per words: 4.77777777778 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.30037696126 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.40147322065 2.80592935109 86% => OK
Unique words: 183.0 176.041082164 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.535087719298 0.561755894193 95% => OK
syllable_count: 504.9 506.74238477 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 5.0 16.0721442886 31% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 68.0 20.2975951904 335% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 171.863899642 49.4020404114 348% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 326.8 106.682146367 306% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 68.4 20.7667163134 329% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 21.8 7.06120827912 309% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.218736134989 0.244688304435 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.121697297196 0.084324248473 144% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0916504757495 0.0667982634062 137% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.144232245437 0.151304729494 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0872143965316 0.056905535591 153% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 35.3 13.0946893788 270% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 10.92 50.2224549098 22% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 28.6 11.3001002004 253% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 11.63 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.29 8.58950901804 120% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 78.4519038076 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 26.0 9.78957915832 266% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 29.2 10.1190380762 289% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 29.0 10.7795591182 269% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, second, secondly, so, whereas, kind of, in my opinion, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 52.0 41.998997996 124% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1634.0 1615.20841683 101% => OK
No of words: 342.0 315.596192385 108% => OK
Chars per words: 4.77777777778 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.30037696126 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.40147322065 2.80592935109 86% => OK
Unique words: 183.0 176.041082164 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.535087719298 0.561755894193 95% => OK
syllable_count: 504.9 506.74238477 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 5.0 16.0721442886 31% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 68.0 20.2975951904 335% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 171.863899642 49.4020404114 348% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 326.8 106.682146367 306% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 68.4 20.7667163134 329% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 21.8 7.06120827912 309% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.218736134989 0.244688304435 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.121697297196 0.084324248473 144% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0916504757495 0.0667982634062 137% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.144232245437 0.151304729494 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0872143965316 0.056905535591 153% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 35.3 13.0946893788 270% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 10.92 50.2224549098 22% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 28.6 11.3001002004 253% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 11.63 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.29 8.58950901804 120% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 78.4519038076 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 26.0 9.78957915832 266% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 29.2 10.1190380762 289% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 29.0 10.7795591182 269% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.