Many students relocate after graduation or after they complete schooling mostly to far away continents assuming that they can fetch better opportunities, few people argue that it can uneconomical and studies can be completed in ones home country, but I do not agree with this notion and I feel a student as a immigrant is out of his comfort zone and can strive harder when compared to studying in ones native.
Relocating for studies is not a new trend, from ancient time people believed in effective teaching and learning in foreign country can improve the flow of knowledge since foreign teaching are significantly different from what we can learn in our native. In this contemporary society we have witnessed that this trend has increased drastically and especially in continents like north America and Europe we have seen an high influx of immigrants who migrate for studies and most of them with a motive of settling there itself. I completely agree with the fact that the benefits of studying abroad outnumber the benefits if studying in our native, there are numerous advantages few of which are, Firstly, When students relocate they can experience new cultures and see foreign lifestyle which can improve their lifestyle adapting to the cultures they like, Secondly, the income that they can generate in part time jobs can be more than what they could have made in a full time job back in their home town, Moreover, A major part of immigrant students are Asians this is mostly because of the high population in Asian countries we witness there is less space for the population and due to fast paced lifestyle the opportunities eventually get saturated.
To conclude, Studies in our native can be more economical and less stress full since we are around family and in our society but for ambitious students it is always advised to move out from their comfort zone and experience a foreign culture in order to adapt to a better lifestyle which could later benefit the upcoming generations and also benefit the country's economy which they choose to study in.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'one's'?
Suggestion: one's
...nomical and studies can be completed in ones home country, but I do not agree with t...
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Line 1, column 308, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...ith this notion and I feel a student as a immigrant is out of his comfort zone an...
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Message: Did you mean 'one's'?
Suggestion: one's
...ive harder when compared to studying in ones native. Relocating for studies is not ...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...our native. In this contemporary society we have witnessed that this trend has in...
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Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: a
...e north America and Europe we have seen an high influx of immigrants who migrate f...
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Line 2, column 539, Rule ID: AGREE_WITH_THE_FACT[1]
Message: Use simply 'agree that'.
Suggestion: agree that
... of settling there itself. I completely agree with the fact that the benefits of studying abroad outnumb...
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Message: This word is normally spelled with hyphen.
Suggestion: part-time
...y, the income that they can generate in part time jobs can be more than what they could h...
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Suggestion: fulltime
...ore than what they could have made in a full time job back in their home town, Moreover, ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, i feel
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 36.0 24.0651302605 150% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1717.0 1615.20841683 106% => OK
No of words: 349.0 315.596192385 111% => OK
Chars per words: 4.91977077364 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.32221490584 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6392811291 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 181.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.518624641834 0.561755894193 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 558.0 506.74238477 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 5.0 16.0721442886 31% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 69.0 20.2975951904 340% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 168.899496743 49.4020404114 342% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 343.4 106.682146367 322% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 69.8 20.7667163134 336% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 13.8 7.06120827912 195% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.38176352705 68% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.189459677092 0.244688304435 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.106557040375 0.084324248473 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0392009822387 0.0667982634062 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.135691931556 0.151304729494 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0177512380635 0.056905535591 31% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 36.6 13.0946893788 280% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 1.44 50.2224549098 3% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 14.6 7.44779559118 196% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 30.2 11.3001002004 267% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 12.44 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.72 8.58950901804 125% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 78.4519038076 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 27.0 9.78957915832 276% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 29.6 10.1190380762 293% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 30.0 10.7795591182 278% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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