Some people think that parents should teach children how to be good members of the society Others however believe that school is the place to learn this Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
Education plays a vital role in the development of children. It is argued that parents should educate their kids to become a good manner. Other others dedicate that it should be taken responsibilities by schools. In this essay, I will discuss both of views of these statements and give my own point of view.
On the one hand, parents are not only a child’s first guardian but also is the first teacher. They are inherited the habits, behaviours and characteristics, are transfered. However, family need to educate them for being a kind person. First of all, to respect the elderly. They should greet everyone with smile so that they feel respectful. Secondly, children should help everyone whenever in need. This is not only build them for a warm heart but also sympathy and spreads benevolence to people around them. Finally, the highest education should be acquired. They tend to be confident about themself, be satisfy about their lift quality and have a responsibility for their own circumstances. To make both family and society to be an ideal place to live in.
On the other hand, school is a crucial part of fundamental knowledge in their development progress. Firstly, children often spends almost time in school. This environment in there by teachers and friends have a great influence on them. They learn a lot lessons about morality and behave ways in regular basic in their class. They knew that to obey their teachers and behave reasonably with friends in school community. This is help them for being a good manner with everyone. Secondly, to orient their profession when they grow up. They are getting got enormous knowledge in each lesson to prepare for their career and become a beneficial citizen of society what that family is not able to teach them well.
In conclusion, in my point of view, both parents and school are a crucial contribution for children to be a good person in society.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, firstly, however, if, second, secondly, so, well, in conclusion, first of all, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 37.0 24.0651302605 154% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1592.0 1615.20841683 99% => OK
No of words: 325.0 315.596192385 103% => OK
Chars per words: 4.89846153846 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.24591054749 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71480882978 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 172.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.529230769231 0.561755894193 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 482.4 506.74238477 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 5.43587174349 202% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 16.0721442886 143% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.2975951904 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 31.1823710556 49.4020404114 63% => OK
Chars per sentence: 69.2173913043 106.682146367 65% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.1304347826 20.7667163134 68% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.34782608696 7.06120827912 76% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 16.0 8.67935871743 184% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.266245988105 0.244688304435 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0737684538536 0.084324248473 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.065690998789 0.0667982634062 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.194456732083 0.151304729494 129% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0768801370382 0.056905535591 135% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.7 13.0946893788 66% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 65.73 50.2224549098 131% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 11.3001002004 67% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.55 12.4159519038 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.54 8.58950901804 88% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 78.4519038076 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 9.78957915832 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.1190380762 75% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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