Some people think that parents should teach children how to be good members of society. Other, however, believe that school is the place to learn this.
Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
It cannot be denied that children should be educated to become a good citizen, but there are arguments about who is responsible to do this: parents or teachers. In my opinion, both parents and teachers should participate in this training for some reasons as follows.
First, it is parents who can join with their children with a lot of activities such as studying, playing, doing housework,... For each activities, there are huge things for children to learn from including precious social skills that are essential. Many of these things cannot be fully taught at school. Moreover, at school there are so many pupils that hardly can teachers take care of every single one. Parent-teaching enables a child to learn and put it in use immediately with direct help.
Schooling also plays an important part in teaching children to behave well. In school, children not just study academically, they learn to work in group as well. Teamwork allows children to communicate and solve problems arising among members and with this skill, a child probably has more chance to succeed in life.
In conclusion, parents and school should hold hands to help their children become good members of society.
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- Some people think that parents should teach children how to be good members of society. Other, however, believe that school is the place to learn this.Discuss both these views and give your own opinion. 56
- The pie chart below shows the main reasons why agricultural land becomes less productive. The table shows how these causes affected three regions of the world during the 1990s.Summerise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and mak 56
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 122, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , .
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, moreover, so, well, in conclusion, such as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 8.3376753507 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1000.0 1615.20841683 62% => OK
No of words: 197.0 315.596192385 62% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.07614213198 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.74642080493 4.20363070211 89% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66672893672 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 125.0 176.041082164 71% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.634517766497 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 290.7 506.74238477 57% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 30.5973584989 49.4020404114 62% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.9090909091 106.682146367 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.9090909091 20.7667163134 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.18181818182 7.06120827912 102% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.302337920166 0.244688304435 124% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.11167342325 0.084324248473 132% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0635307775196 0.0667982634062 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.193119686548 0.151304729494 128% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0555250550626 0.056905535591 98% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.5 13.0946893788 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 50.2224549098 125% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 11.3001002004 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.89 12.4159519038 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.69 8.58950901804 90% => OK
difficult_words: 40.0 78.4519038076 51% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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