In general, children are sensitive in their childhood and they spend most of the time with their parents. Children will follow the footsteps of their parents, however, once they start attending a school and they will start learning some teachers and Friends. Parents are the first person who will be teaching more than their teachers although teachers will be teaching how to read the right and so many things in a real society and both of them have equal importance in their life. On the one hand, there are parents they will teach basic things in everyday life which is a very important in their first steps and they will be following the same thing throughout their life.
On one hand, there are parents, we will see each basic things in everyday life which is very important in their first stape and they will be following the same thing throughout their life. At home, the environment should be peace and quiet so that they will grow up in a healthy atmosphere. For instance, if the parents maintain peace and love inside the home then children will be loving and caring in their life and will become a good member of the society.
On the other hand, even in the school so they will be polite and well-behaved is they are taught and grown ups in are healthy environment with their friends and teachers. However, in school, I think bad or unkind pupils or teachers always sit in. Hello, children should be strong because all depends on themselves.
As a whole, parents and teachers possess equal roles to make child a better citizen of society. It is very difficult to choose one particular person because both have an equal role in teaching them about good and bad for them and how to be a good member of society.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 380, Rule ID: PROGRESSIVE_VERBS[1]
Message: This verb is normally not used in the progressive form. Try a simple form instead.
...love inside the home then children will be loving and caring in their life and will becom...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, if, so, then, well, for instance, i think, in general, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 7.85571142285 178% => OK
Conjunction : 19.0 10.4138276553 182% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1423.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 307.0 315.596192385 97% => OK
Chars per words: 4.63517915309 5.12529762239 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18585898806 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.30159740941 2.80592935109 82% => OK
Unique words: 140.0 176.041082164 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.456026058632 0.561755894193 81% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 420.3 506.74238477 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 48.8859216271 49.4020404114 99% => OK
Chars per sentence: 118.583333333 106.682146367 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.5833333333 20.7667163134 123% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.33333333333 7.06120827912 104% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.185845587496 0.244688304435 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0853593208244 0.084324248473 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0444148857706 0.0667982634062 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.133267645175 0.151304729494 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0294043156514 0.056905535591 52% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 13.0946893788 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 63.02 50.2224549098 125% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.93 12.4159519038 80% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.83 8.58950901804 80% => OK
difficult_words: 38.0 78.4519038076 48% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 9.78957915832 133% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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