The issue which was raised by scientists regarding Torreya tree survival in Florida has some contradictions between passage and lecturer speech. While the concept in the text is about three options to prevent tree extinction, the speaker told that none of them would be successful because of some reasonable facts.
First, the opportunity to re-establish the tree in the same location has some dangers related with global warming. Moreover, the tree itself needs larger region to be planted. It also means that the climate in the chosen area can be changed to a dryer one so this cannot be a right conservational option.
Secondly, the re-location of the tree far from Florida implies the danger that the black locust tree is likely to be spread quickly and in this case it could damage other plant species of the area due to the inpredictability of the system migration. These complications can also lead to new challenges regarding to survival projects of other trees and plants.
Third,reservation opportunities im the research centers could lead to the distortions in population of trees, which include necessity to have large area to resist and diversity of the trees population. It is obvious thatresearch centers are not capable to survive diversity of the trees in a long term period.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 199, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...on to be planted. It also means that the climate in the chosen area can be change...
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Line 4, column 6, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , reservation
...jects of other trees and plants. Third,reservation opportunities im the research centers c...
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Line 4, column 185, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'trees'' or 'tree's'?
Suggestion: trees'; tree's
...rge area to resist and diversity of the trees population. It is obvious thatresearch ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, moreover, regarding, second, secondly, so, third, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 10.4613686534 96% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 5.04856512141 119% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 7.30242825607 55% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 12.0772626932 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 11.0 22.412803532 49% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 30.3222958057 115% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 5.01324503311 140% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1083.0 1373.03311258 79% => OK
No of words: 213.0 270.72406181 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.08450704225 5.08290768461 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.82027741392 4.04702891845 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.98141657705 2.5805825403 116% => OK
Unique words: 129.0 145.348785872 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.605633802817 0.540411800872 112% => OK
syllable_count: 330.3 419.366225166 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.55342163355 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 3.25607064018 92% => OK
Article: 5.0 8.23620309051 61% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.25165562914 80% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.51434878587 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 2.5761589404 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 13.0662251656 69% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 21.2450331126 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.3877037676 49.2860985944 108% => OK
Chars per sentence: 120.333333333 110.228320801 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.6666666667 21.698381199 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.55555555556 7.06452816374 107% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 4.19205298013 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 4.33554083885 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 4.45695364238 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.27373068433 47% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.235741277708 0.272083759551 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0856701871004 0.0996497079465 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0530157440341 0.0662205650399 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.128735862517 0.162205337803 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0437734838015 0.0443174109184 99% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.3 13.3589403974 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 53.8541721854 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 5.55761589404 158% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.0289183223 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.48 12.2367328918 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.15 8.42419426049 109% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 63.6247240618 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.7273730684 103% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.498013245 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.2008830022 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 86.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 26.0 Out of 30
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