Some people think paying taxes is big enough contribution to their society while others think people have more responsibilities as members of society than only paying taxes

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Some people think paying taxes is big enough contribution to their society, while others think people have more responsibilities as members of society than only paying taxes.

People have different views about paying taxes. Some believe that paying taxes is the sole responsibility of citizens, while others believe that citizens have other obligations in addition to paying taxes. In my opinion, I believe that people’s obligations society are more significant than just paying taxes.
On the other hand, some people think that only paying taxes is their main duty to society. It is clear that the taxes paid by citizen constitute the main budget of state and this money is essential in society. Most of these taxes are spent on road repairs, education, health care and workers’ salaries. In other words, the money collected from society is used for their own convenience and this shows the important of taxes.
On the other hand, other people think people have not only a tax obligation, but many other obligations as well. Citizens have many responsibilities. One of which is the preservation of historical monuments and this is also enshrined in the constitutions of many states. In addition, people should also protect the environment because human begins have a great influence on the protection of nature. Because the main factor in the pollution of nature is humans.
In conclusion, people’s obligations to society are not only to pay taxes, they also have other vital compulsion.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 401, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Because” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
... influence on the protection of nature. Because the main factor in the pollution of nat...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, well, while, in addition, in conclusion, in fact, in my opinion, in other words, on the other hand

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 41.998997996 64% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1109.0 1615.20841683 69% => OK
No of words: 215.0 315.596192385 68% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.15813953488 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.82921379641 4.20363070211 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82584073841 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 113.0 176.041082164 64% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.525581395349 0.561755894193 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 352.8 506.74238477 70% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 32.9618750544 49.4020404114 67% => OK
Chars per sentence: 85.3076923077 106.682146367 80% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.5384615385 20.7667163134 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.0 7.06120827912 127% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.477332601273 0.244688304435 195% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.166041442365 0.084324248473 197% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.141087661345 0.0667982634062 211% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.292777973645 0.151304729494 194% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0602133984814 0.056905535591 106% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.1 13.0946893788 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 50.2224549098 110% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.35 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.96 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 48.0 78.4519038076 61% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Minimum 250 words wanted.

Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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