some people think that paying taxes is enough to use society, others argue that being a citizen involved more responsibilities. discuss what is your opinion.
Lifestyle has undergone dramatic changes over a couple of decades. Presently, some proportion of masses believe that paying taxes is an amazing contribution towards the society. By contrast, other says that it is not the particular solutions to make society better for masses so people should do more fire society. Here, I would like to account both the view points with my own perception.
Manifold points are there to support the former view. First and foremost. Administrative provide services to society by collecting taxes for masses. To illustrate, government use these taxes in distinct fields such as education, health and many others which are lucrative for society. Apart from it, people who are working under the ownership of government receive pay through this taxes and serve their service to the people of society. Thus, taxes which are collected by folks contribute remarkably to uplift the standard of society. On the other side, people have conflicting views.
To begin with, people should take some responsibility for society rather than just paying taxes. For example, in society there are numerous bad Custom such as dowry system, female foeticide, violence against women, are available. So, people must take some appropriate steps about the these problems and try to make peaceful society. Furthermore, environment contamination are rising day by day. Therefore, people should use environment friendly things for making pollution free society. What is more, kidnapping, rape case, are worrying concern for society. Masses should rise their voice for this evil. Hence, all these steps by individuals can make society a better place for living.
To recapitulate, Undeniably, both sides have their own significance. However, still I believe that everyone must think to remove those things in the community which are present for decades and effect people living.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 378, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: these
...rship of government receive pay through this taxes and serve their service to the pe...
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Line 5, column 215, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...emale foeticide, violence against women, are available. So, people must take some...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, furthermore, hence, however, if, so, still, therefore, thus, apart from, for example, such as, to begin with, what is more
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1595.0 1615.20841683 99% => OK
No of words: 294.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.42517006803 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14082457966 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70522801182 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 181.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.615646258503 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 506.7 506.74238477 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 16.0721442886 131% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.2975951904 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 35.4878536277 49.4020404114 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 75.9523809524 106.682146367 71% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.0 20.7667163134 67% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.38095238095 7.06120827912 90% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 3.4128256513 234% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.218618370459 0.244688304435 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0617632037675 0.084324248473 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0588387288335 0.0667982634062 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.130127180654 0.151304729494 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0532300929638 0.056905535591 94% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.1 13.0946893788 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 48.81 50.2224549098 97% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.62 12.4159519038 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.36 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 78.4519038076 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 9.78957915832 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.1190380762 75% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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