Some people think that people moving to a new country should accept new culture in the foreign country rather than living as a separate minority group with different lifestyles.do you agree or disagree?
In this modern era, living in another countries for personal purposes has become more popular. While many people think that people, who leave in the foreign country they should accept new culture rather than leaving in the minority group with various lifestyles in that nation, other people do not agree with the given statement, this essay will discuss why people that accepting new culture is not beneficial in another countries and why i strongly agree with the given statement, all the explanations described in the fallowing paragraphs.
Accepting methods of a different culture, while people live in the foreign country is not beneficial. To embarks with, if people come from some traditional places, they found very uncomfortable in new places because of food habits, lifestyle, and dressing styles. My friend Rakesh for example, who comes from Punjab, so he wear their traditional cap (paghdi) all the time. When he moved to UAE for a job, which is different from India. He found so many types of difficulties in country’s lifestyles and food. That was a reason for he had homesickness and decided to made a group of sikh community in Dubai in 2019. Therefore, these type of evidence proves that sometimes people found so many obstacles in terms of accepting a new culture, which is draw attention of many humans.
On the other hand, when people accepted a new traditional methods of a particular country, they live their life easily. It gives more information of festivals, its lifestyles, and many more, which is helpful in growing as a person and become more experienced than ever before. For example, many students started to celebrating various festivals, while they were studying in Canada, which was a result of the survey by the university of Gujarat in 2020. Indeed, despite having ideas about a culture, people will be feel new and unfamiliar things in their life , which makes them a better citizen too.
To conclude, although leaving in minority groups reduce chances of homesickness, accepting a new culture gives more positive impacts than it, people become more knowledgeable about other festivals and traditions. In my words, I strongly agrees with the given idea because it creates many possibilities for learning and beneficial outcomes for people.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 324, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'he' must be used with a third-person verb: 'wears'.
Suggestion: wears
...r example, who comes from Punjab, so he wear their traditional cap paghdi all the ti...
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Line 5, column 59, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'method'?
Suggestion: method
... when people accepted a new traditional methods of a particular country, they live thei...
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Line 5, column 559, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
... new and unfamiliar things in their life , which makes them a better citizen too. ...
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Line 7, column 238, Rule ID: NON3PRS_VERB[1]
Message: The pronoun 'I' must be used with a non-third-person form of a verb: 'agree'
Suggestion: agree
...and traditions. In my words, I strongly agrees with the given idea because it creates ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, so, therefore, while, for example, as a result, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 7.30460921844 192% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 50.0 41.998997996 119% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1911.0 1615.20841683 118% => OK
No of words: 372.0 315.596192385 118% => OK
Chars per words: 5.13709677419 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.39173103935 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74027689071 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 198.0 176.041082164 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.532258064516 0.561755894193 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 602.1 506.74238477 119% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 5.43587174349 184% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 7.0 2.10420841683 333% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 88.1558216392 49.4020404114 178% => OK
Chars per sentence: 127.4 106.682146367 119% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.8 20.7667163134 119% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.6 7.06120827912 65% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.389852138145 0.244688304435 159% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.118589783069 0.084324248473 141% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.121997997097 0.0667982634062 183% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.241909678082 0.151304729494 160% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.132756244336 0.056905535591 233% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.2 13.0946893788 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 50.2224549098 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.83 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.94 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 97.0 78.4519038076 124% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 18.0 9.78957915832 184% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.