Some people think that people who choose a job early and keep doing it are more likely to get
a satisfying career life than those who frequently change jobs
Making progress is a long-term process that need some essential requirements and often associated with hardworking. Although some people believe trying a diversity range of job increase the chance of success, but I think keep doing in a one path result in sustainable satisfaction.
First of all, it should be stuck in the mind that there is not any unique definition for satisfaction, but referring to a common definition, there are some features such as setting goals and achieving them, certain level of career advancement, affordability to buy whatever needed. Starting a job and continuing it is considered as a best way to achieve goals and making progress. Besides, taking some professional training and continue development results in thrive. One of the main requirement for promotion and taking higher position is continuous development which lead to taking higher level of responsibilities.
On the other hand, there is a solid connection between the amount of salary and satisfaction feelings. When people excel in their job, their income would increase significantly. After a while, because of adequate experience and reputation, people can manage their time and reduce the amount of working hours and making more free time to do recreation activities.
It is noteworthy to say that according to plenty of psychological research, it seems that those people who are not able to do an activity for a long time and prefer to change their path, do not have a strong character to face with all difficulties and challenges. In fact, this group of people, can hardly find satisfaction.
Taking everything into consideration, it seems that keep doing in a particular profession result in more progress which is associated with a great satisfaction feeling.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 333, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[1]
Message: Use 'the' with the superlative.
Suggestion: the
... job and continuing it is considered as a best way to achieve goals and making pr...
^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, first, if, so, while, i think, in fact, such as, first of all, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 18.0 8.3376753507 216% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1493.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 282.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.29432624113 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09790868904 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.15892169551 2.80592935109 113% => OK
Unique words: 167.0 176.041082164 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.59219858156 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 464.4 506.74238477 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 68.0618081028 49.4020404114 138% => OK
Chars per sentence: 124.416666667 106.682146367 117% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.5 20.7667163134 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.83333333333 7.06120827912 111% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.221450195519 0.244688304435 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0683375939503 0.084324248473 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0655483670598 0.0667982634062 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.113391408552 0.151304729494 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0452753966896 0.056905535591 80% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.2 13.0946893788 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.7 12.4159519038 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.09 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 78.4519038076 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.5 9.78957915832 158% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 16.0 10.7795591182 148% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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