Some people think that a person can never understand the culture of a country unless they speak the language. Do you agree with this opinion?
When a person speak a different language rather than his mother-tongue, say his national language of the country he resides, doesn't mean that he is unaware and ignored of his own culture and ethnics. So I am totally in contrast towards the statement provided there.
Some people might suppress their own language and get into the new or official language in order to attain a particular state in the society or the organizations, this doesn't visualize their disinterest in culture, rules or patriotism towards their country. For example, in our country India, Hindi being a national language was strongly and vividly pronounced in northern, central and some in western parts of the country however in the case of southern region people utilize the language until their academic levels than being into professional.
Each state in our country have their own official state language and they are widely in practice when compared to the national language, although this statistics doesn't details about people, whom weren't aware or doesn't understood the culture and prosperous side of the country.
We have diversified culture in different states of our country but when it comes to a common language, there arises a situation where people tend to become repugnant. People often chooses different language rather than their own one to compete in the outside world of companies for their survival. Some may exile their home or country to different countries, where you would require a language to communicate with that kind of people and this became mandatory process in a day-to-day life.
In the case of olden days, tribal people have their own language and culture with minimal difference to the culture of the country though they didn't stop following their culture towards livelihood.
In summarizing the ideas dealt above regarding the languages that were distinguished with that of their own, doesn't indicate their ignorance or negligence towards the culture, sometimes people get adopted to the change so as to enrich their survival and livelihood.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, may, regarding, so, as to, for example, in contrast, kind of, in contrast to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 10.4138276553 163% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 24.0651302605 141% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1736.0 1615.20841683 107% => OK
No of words: 330.0 315.596192385 105% => OK
Chars per words: 5.26060606061 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.26214759535 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68147404058 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 168.0 176.041082164 95% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.509090909091 0.561755894193 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 545.4 506.74238477 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 33.0 20.2975951904 163% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 67.5028888271 49.4020404114 137% => OK
Chars per sentence: 173.6 106.682146367 163% => OK
Words per sentence: 33.0 20.7667163134 159% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.4 7.06120827912 133% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.38176352705 137% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 9.0 5.01903807615 179% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.184504398252 0.244688304435 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0848624430974 0.084324248473 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.052535261839 0.0667982634062 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.108286895524 0.151304729494 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0466442605834 0.056905535591 82% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 19.8 13.0946893788 151% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 29.52 50.2224549098 59% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 17.3 11.3001002004 153% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.82 12.4159519038 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.2 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 78.4519038076 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 15.2 10.1190380762 150% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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