Some people think that personal happiness is directly related to economic success. Others argue that happiness depends on different factors. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
In many nations around the globe, people have different views about happiness life. While, some people claim that huge economic growth plays a predominant role in life in order to happiness, and others think that individuals are happy with themselves owing to natural factors. This essay will examine to reasons of both conditions with my personal viewpoint.
To commence with, there are distinct causes about how economic sources make batter life style along with happiness in life. It is worth considering, high sallary able people to full fill their fundamental needs in life. Research has found that there are almost all parents have thinking that if their children work hard or study to achieve success with high sallary status then they would be have the best opportunities to purchase everything which are related with human life. For example, in modern epoch, people who have a next level job, they are living astounding life style such as they have a good house, high brand vehicles, health facilities, good education facilities and many more; therefore, they feel they are happy in life because they have a good succeeded platform.
In the second place, there are several reasons how other factors are importantant in individuals life. First and foremost, people are satisfy with their current situation. To explicate it, the trend of growing happiness in life, most people have connected with many kinds of religions. So those people do not compare to themselves with oders. Moreover, they think that everything do not purchase with money such as feelings, love, relations and so on. According to the exports, there are number of families who are living with Full of happiness without any economic achievement in life.
To recapitulate, getting happiness in life with help of money achievement has become a trend, and some natural factors play a significant role in life and i also agree with this statement.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 393, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[4]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'have the best'.
Suggestion: have the best
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Line 3, column 450, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'related'.
Suggestion: related
...nities to purchase everything which are relate with human life. For example, in modern...
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Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
... epoch, people who have a next level job , they are living astounding life style s...
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Line 5, column 230, Rule ID: MOST_SOME_OF_NNS[1]
Message: After 'most of', you should use 'the' ('most of the people') or simply say ''most people''.
Suggestion: most of the people; most people
...the trend of growing happiness in life, most of people have connected with many kinds of relig...
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Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
... of money achievement has become a trend , and some natural factors play a signifi...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, if, moreover, second, so, then, therefore, while, for example, such as, in the second place
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 50.0 41.998997996 119% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1613.0 1615.20841683 100% => OK
No of words: 314.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.13694267516 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20951839842 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.58011163431 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 176.0 176.041082164 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.56050955414 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 513.9 506.74238477 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 70.0392382737 49.4020404114 142% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.214285714 106.682146367 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.4285714286 20.7667163134 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.42857142857 7.06120827912 105% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.191519340352 0.244688304435 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0812060144672 0.084324248473 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.048622345023 0.0667982634062 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.144896813797 0.151304729494 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0718929827129 0.056905535591 126% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.0 13.0946893788 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.83 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.15 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 78.4519038076 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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