Some people think that poverty is the reason behind most crimes. Do you agree or disagree.
Some people consider it that the main causes of increasing criminal activities are because of impoverished people in society. In my opinion, I disagree with that poor person's attempt to break the law, also this essay provides some reason for the crime is lack of education and family inattention.
To begin with, The crime rate is rising due to the young adult and not concentrate on the studies during college time. At that time, They always not attend the classes properly and off and take the break from the studies so that, When the examination has taken place, unfortunately, students fail in the test. For example, in the United States newspaper showed that most criminals in the city take part in criminal activity because these people have not passed territory education. For these reasons, people who do not have a college degree are performing more crimes in the area, not the poor people.
Another reason for the minor crimes namely, robbery chain snatching are increased result of parents are not strict whenever their child performs any activity which detrimental to people. And therefore, it is a duty of guardians that they take care of the children otherwise, in later life young people try to do offend. In other words, Many scientists prove their people and more think about the crimes if they are not surrounded by family or improper childcare. Due to this reason, the rate of offenders is increased as their family members not check their child activity.
In conclusion, in my view, Crimes are climate to high-level is not by poor people of poverty but due to lack of knowledge in higher secondary and also family give less importance to children while they grew up
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, second, so, therefore, while, for example, in conclusion, in my opinion, in my view, in other words, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 7.85571142285 0% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1402.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 287.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.8850174216 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11595363751 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.516634795 2.80592935109 90% => OK
Unique words: 162.0 176.041082164 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.564459930314 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 452.7 506.74238477 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 32.7136335215 49.4020404114 66% => OK
Chars per sentence: 127.454545455 106.682146367 119% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.0909090909 20.7667163134 126% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.7272727273 7.06120827912 166% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.15391682241 0.244688304435 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0586290289855 0.084324248473 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0373790762549 0.0667982634062 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0919058714824 0.151304729494 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0300488444596 0.056905535591 53% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.6 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.09 50.2224549098 90% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.38 12.4159519038 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.67 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 78.4519038076 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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