Certainly, it's true that in this contemporary era, with the accelerate speed of technology people introspect that constructing new libraries are unncessaries. however, on the flip side people think that it's good. I personally believe that libraries are very useful for people.
To start with, firstly, libraries are useful for those people who have no money for getting education but they want to study.secondly, some University students or office people also go in libraries because they want a peaceful atmosphere for doing their own work. In addition, there are different types of books with full information and if a person want to read any book so he would easily issue that book and read on some security and he has not to buy that book and it's helpful for poor people who could not afford books.for instance, I usually go in libraries beacuse I love to read different types of books and I could read all books in free. Furthermore, I have practice my ielts writting and reading section in public libraries because I love silence places.
Looking at the other view, firstly, people are using internet alot for getting any information in any field rather than go in libraries.secondly, people could read all information about anything whenever they want and they have not to go anywhere. Thirdly, internet save our time as compared to public libraries.for example, Wikipedia is very famous page in all over the world if u want to get any information about sports, studies, musicians e.t.c. so you could get all information in just one click. It's useful for working people who have no more time to learn anything .
On a concluding note, undoubtedly these days public libraries is not useful beacuse of advanced technology yet, we must understand that public libraries are good for those people who have no financial support or those people who have no space for studying.
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- SOME THINK THAT CLIMATE CHANGE REFORMS WILL NEGATIVELY AFFECT BUSINESS OTHERS FEEL THEY ARE AN OPPORTUNITY FOR BUSINESSES DISCUSS BOTH SIDES AND GIVE YOUR OWN OPINION 67
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- Some think that all entertainment TV programmes should educate people about the importance of social issues To what extent do you agree or disagree 73
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... book so he would easily issue that book and read on some security and he has not...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, furthermore, however, if, look, second, secondly, so, third, thirdly, for example, for instance, in addition, to start with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 24.0651302605 137% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1570.0 1615.20841683 97% => OK
No of words: 315.0 315.596192385 100% => OK
Chars per words: 4.98412698413 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21286593061 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80960623532 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 165.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.52380952381 0.561755894193 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 501.3 506.74238477 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 31.0 20.2975951904 153% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 104.987808816 49.4020404114 213% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 157.0 106.682146367 147% => OK
Words per sentence: 31.5 20.7667163134 152% => OK
Discourse Markers: 15.0 7.06120827912 212% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.184159468954 0.244688304435 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0885113654255 0.084324248473 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0442939334685 0.0667982634062 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.131393123962 0.151304729494 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0403267114582 0.056905535591 71% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.8 13.0946893788 136% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.01 50.2224549098 80% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.4 11.3001002004 136% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.2 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.88 8.58950901804 92% => OK
difficult_words: 54.0 78.4519038076 69% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.4 10.1190380762 142% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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