Some people think that robots are very important for humans' future development. Others, however, think that robots are a dangerous invention that could have negative effects on society. Discuss both views and give your opinion
The impact of robots in our future life has always been debated, some believe that they are our key for entering a new era, others are worried about the dangers and negative influences that it has on civilization.
In this essay, both views and aspects will be discussed.
From ages, ago many movies have been build about future and robots are always playing a core role in them. this shows that from long ago people imagined a future world where robots are playing a big part in creating it, But what would they offer us? well as it's already happening in big factories their efficiency is far more than what humans have to offer also we can see a huge difference between other factors like accuracy and speed. Furthermore, robots also prevent the loss of human resources, which means the people can put their effort into different fields which cannot be covered by mechanical machines. So basically they help humanity by increasing speed and being more efficient than humans.
On the other hand, many are afraid of what's going to happen in a world that runs by robots and they got a pretty good reason for their saying. First of all, if robots do all the practical activities in companies, factories, shops and even houses there be nothing left for humans to take part in, in result of this not only there well-being is what's at stake in addition to this diseases such as obesity is going to grow by each generation. Secondly, the fear of robots getting out of control has always been frightening for humankind and even if that doesn't be the case, countries will look to weaponize them and this source of power will lead into war.
In conclusion, robots can be harmful and helpful in our lives. How we use them is what determines it.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, if, look, second, secondly, so, well, in addition, in conclusion, such as, first of all, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 24.0651302605 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1438.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 309.0 315.596192385 98% => OK
Chars per words: 4.65372168285 5.12529762239 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1926597562 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.34419950314 2.80592935109 84% => OK
Unique words: 185.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.598705501618 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 444.6 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 73.9426861382 49.4020404114 150% => OK
Chars per sentence: 119.833333333 106.682146367 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.75 20.7667163134 124% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.4166666667 7.06120827912 162% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.170442289082 0.244688304435 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0649194165073 0.084324248473 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0343917033693 0.0667982634062 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.094154379597 0.151304729494 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.033699917081 0.056905535591 59% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 63.02 50.2224549098 125% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.99 12.4159519038 80% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.89 8.58950901804 92% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 78.4519038076 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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