Some people think that schools should involve students in school management. Do you agree or disagree with this idea? Give reasons for your answer.
Educational institutes are essential for each nation development. So, choosing a good education administration became a issue. Considerable amount of individuals believe that school must indulge pupil into educational management. I agree with this notion because it helps to create better understanding between teachers and students and Students also get chance to share their views.
To begin with, there are numerous reasons why school should involve students. The predominant one is developement of better understanding between scholars and teachers, which makes easy to tell about their decisions. In many educational institutes,where only teachers are available in management always impose their views without caring about children. For example, a recent survey shows that schools are more successful where both are involved than those where only teachers are available. Therefore, institutes of education could be better by making involvement of children in management.
The another reason is that it give chance to students to share their views. In other words, they can told about their idea to improve school education system because new generation has more creative and logical thinking than old aged teachers. For example, the recent data shows that 90% schools in India are successful because of young children involvement. Hence, to get good results student should involve.
In Conclusion, including children in management by schools is a good step to improve various institutes.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, hence, so, therefore, for example, in conclusion, in other words, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1278.0 1615.20841683 79% => OK
No of words: 224.0 315.596192385 71% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.70535714286 5.12529762239 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.86867284054 4.20363070211 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.95111910198 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 138.0 176.041082164 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.616071428571 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 396.0 506.74238477 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 35.469806073 49.4020404114 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.2857142857 106.682146367 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.0 20.7667163134 77% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.07142857143 7.06120827912 86% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.254473271991 0.244688304435 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.086140754255 0.084324248473 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0671680459458 0.0667982634062 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.151164072951 0.151304729494 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0326691799786 0.056905535591 57% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 13.0946893788 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 38.31 50.2224549098 76% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.54 12.4159519038 125% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.52 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 58.0 78.4519038076 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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