Some people think secondary school students should study international news as one of their subjects.Other people say this is a waste of valuable school time.
Secondary school students should study international news as one of their subject,think some people.By other people opinions this is a waste of valued school time.
Secondary school students should study international news as one of their subjects,because they are adults,not children and they should know and study international news.They should know about their problem,improvment and their news about country.They are need for this news,because they have sujects named Constitution,International idea of Independence and etc.They should know all their international news,because they need it for this subjects,if they do not know about it thr can not understand themes.They should know,what happened in their country,what news,how much problems are in their country and what they should do to help their country.Not only secondary school students should study international news as one of their subjects,but also high school student.
But other people think it is a waste of their valuable time. Other people think it is a waste time,because they think, that it is unnecessary,that they are children and they do not need for this news. They want that their children should study only the subjects,which are in the school program.They want that their children should study only the subjects which are they love and want to study, which are necessary for their.It is their opinion.
In my opinion the secondary school children and high school children should study international news as one of their subject,because it is necessary for their.If child want to become a policeman or in the power or become a president he or she should know and study international news and do not skip one of them.Not only school children,but whole of humanity should know their international news.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, second, so, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 17.0 7.85571142285 216% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 52.0 24.0651302605 216% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 21.0 41.998997996 50% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1505.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 279.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.39426523297 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.08696624509 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.41787048025 2.80592935109 122% => OK
Unique words: 106.0 176.041082164 60% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.379928315412 0.561755894193 68% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 435.6 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 7.0 2.10420841683 333% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 16.0721442886 37% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 46.0 20.2975951904 227% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 237.141835196 49.4020404114 480% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 250.833333333 106.682146367 235% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 46.5 20.7667163134 224% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 6.66666666667 7.06120827912 94% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 33.0 5.01903807615 657% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.500568260166 0.244688304435 205% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.376862654776 0.084324248473 447% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.200392021742 0.0667982634062 300% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.432968145248 0.151304729494 286% => Maybe some contents are duplicated.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.193103319674 0.056905535591 339% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 27.2 13.0946893788 208% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 24.79 50.2224549098 49% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 13.0 7.44779559118 175% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 21.2 11.3001002004 188% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.87 12.4159519038 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.52 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 46.0 78.4519038076 59% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 30.5 9.78957915832 312% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 20.4 10.1190380762 202% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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