In modern days, competition is very crucial step in success. Many companies expect their employees to be competitive and co-operative in their work. In my opinion, both play a important role.However both of these qualification must be built in young children.
Parents should teach children about sense of competition. This may increase their success in high rates and also help them grow towards their goal. Even though sense of competition may be good, but excessive sense of competition may result in children rejection in education.
On other side, sense of co-operation is also significant.One person views may differ from other person point of view.It can better than one person's views. This why co-operation should also be taught to children as well. Teaching only sense of co-operation may result in losing his/her confidence.However both has pros and cons. Parent must bring both sense of co-operation and competition in children by making them to understand their differences.
In crux, both sense of co-operation and competition must be taught equally.This will help them to adapt to society and also accept other person view.Even though there will no one to guide them, he/she will able to complete his/her task alone. It is important that children should complete task by alone as well as group. Not only sense of co-operation but also sense of competition are very significant to children growth.
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- IELTS 10 Test 1 Writing Task 1 - Academic 11
- A nation should require all of its students to study the same national curriculum until they enter college.Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the recommendation and explain your reasoning for the position 50
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: However
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Suggestion: However,
... my opinion, both play a important role.However both of these qualification must be bui...
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Message: Did you mean 'this qualification' or 'these qualifications'?
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Suggestion: However
...may result in losing his/her confidence.However both has pros and cons. Parent must bri...
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Suggestion: Even
...ciety and also accept other person view.Even though there will no one to guide them,...
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Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, may, so, well, as well as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 7.85571142285 191% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 7.30460921844 14% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 17.0 8.3376753507 204% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1198.0 1615.20841683 74% => OK
No of words: 226.0 315.596192385 72% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.30088495575 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.87727950738 4.20363070211 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.01767316315 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 121.0 176.041082164 69% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.535398230088 0.561755894193 95% => OK
syllable_count: 359.1 506.74238477 71% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.384769539078 0% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 47.3685037544 49.4020404114 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.1538461538 106.682146367 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.3846153846 20.7667163134 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.92307692308 7.06120827912 70% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 5.01903807615 219% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.310937744461 0.244688304435 127% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.133575659156 0.084324248473 158% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0681634935437 0.0667982634062 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.207974453104 0.151304729494 137% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0381477015886 0.056905535591 67% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 13.0946893788 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.16 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.34 8.58950901804 85% => OK
difficult_words: 41.0 78.4519038076 52% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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