Some people think that a sense of competition in children should be encouraged. Others believe that children who are taught to co-operate rather than compete become more useful adults.
It is considered by some that competition is really necessary among children while others thinks that children who learn to collaborate and work as a team represents nation better. I believe that we should teach our young generation to cooperate with each other for achieving the task rather than considering others as their rivalry.
To Begin with, It is always believed that healthy competition is always good for individuals to perform better and stand out among others. Competition helps in cognitive development of youngsters and allows them to think outside of box and improves their problem solving skills. Competition between different nations and companies energize them to do new inventions which will useful for society. For example, Many technology companies like apple, Samsung spend lots of money in research and development to survive in this growing and competitive market. This competition truly helps the customers as they get the best prices of the products with advanced features.
On the other hand, some working sectors like security and defense which encourages individuals to cooperate with each other and work as team. One cannot outperform if fighting in war or fighting against terror alone.Moreover, while working together we can support others in their thoughts and helps them in their task for betterment of human being. For example, Many countries come forward to fight global issues like terrorism, global warming etc. The issues which are problem to all the nations and severely impacting human civilization needs cooperation of different nations.
In conclusion, though competition gives the sense to children to give their best but for developing the society we need to work together and cooperate among ourselves.In my opinion, we should teach our offspring to support each other and be helpful to others rather competing with others to achieve the same goal.
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- Some people think that a sense of competition in children should be encouraged. Others believe that children who are taught to co-operate rather than compete become more useful adults. 78
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but, if, moreover, really, so, while, for example, in conclusion, in my opinion, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 50.0 41.998997996 119% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1606.0 1615.20841683 99% => OK
No of words: 299.0 315.596192385 95% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.37123745819 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1583189471 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7567010092 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 171.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.571906354515 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 486.0 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 54.9152756526 49.4020404114 111% => OK
Chars per sentence: 133.833333333 106.682146367 125% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.9166666667 20.7667163134 120% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.41666666667 7.06120827912 133% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.208317615961 0.244688304435 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0746636750501 0.084324248473 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0763708080786 0.0667982634062 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.150461754557 0.151304729494 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.094907531501 0.056905535591 167% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.3 13.0946893788 124% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 50.2224549098 94% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.16 12.4159519038 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.84 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 78.4519038076 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.5 9.78957915832 158% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 16.0 10.7795591182 148% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.