Some people think that a sense of competition in children should be encouraged. Others believe that children who are taught to co-operate rather than compete become more useful adults.
Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
Nowadays, many people prefer to use their own cars to commute rather than buses and trains.why do you think this is happening? What can the government do to change it?
Recent days, people are willing to use public transportation to commute and they tend to use their private cars.this is a trend which is having a devastating effect on society.this essay is aimed at analyzing the causes and possible solutions of the current tendency.
One of reasons of this trend is time management.In fact, most people believe that if they use public transport ,they will not reach work on time, because in some cases buses do not work according to schedules and people encounter some difficulties.Thats why pepole think that utilizing public transportation is time-consuming and they prefer to use their private cars.Another contribution to this trend is due to people's comfort.it is well-known that there are a lot of people use public transport . that is why buses or trains are always crowded whereas cars allows people to commute comfortably.
In order to improve the situation some measures can be taken by governments.In fact, if all transport modes work due to their schedules ,it will be easy for people to reach work on time.Therfore, people do not have to use their private cars and they will save money.As a result ,they will be willing to use public transport.Another solution would be to make public transport significantly comfortable for people.For example, if all public transportation types supply with air conditioner , people will feel cosy in all weather conditions on buses or trains .When all is said and done,looking at the causes of this problem, it is felt that the roots of this trend is time management and uncomfortable condition on buses or trains.Thus, it is hoped that governments will take some measures in an effort to prevent this disturbing trend.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, look, so, thus, well, whereas, for example, in fact, as a result, in some cases
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 13.1623246493 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 24.0651302605 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1568.0 1615.20841683 97% => OK
No of words: 309.0 315.596192385 98% => OK
Chars per words: 5.07443365696 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1926597562 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.10945610007 2.80592935109 111% => OK
Unique words: 154.0 176.041082164 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.498381877023 0.561755894193 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 479.7 506.74238477 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 16.0721442886 37% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 51.0 20.2975951904 251% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 278.169462738 49.4020404114 563% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 261.333333333 106.682146367 245% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 51.5 20.7667163134 248% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 14.6666666667 7.06120827912 208% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 22.0 5.01903807615 438% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.67935871743 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.113748788096 0.244688304435 46% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0642597668902 0.084324248473 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0461462848616 0.0667982634062 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0837905556247 0.151304729494 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0268483685155 0.056905535591 47% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 28.2 13.0946893788 215% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 19.71 50.2224549098 39% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 13.0 7.44779559118 175% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 23.2 11.3001002004 205% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 13.01 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.64 8.58950901804 112% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 78.4519038076 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 22.4 10.1190380762 221% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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