Some people think that some types of criminals should not go to prison. Instead they should do unpaid work in the community. To what extent do you agree?
It is argued that some law breakers should not be sentenced to jail, but rather be assigned to community services as a punishment.This essay agrees with that suggestion completely, for the positive impact it provides on the society and the convict himself. This essay will first look at how the re-integration back in to the society will minimize the chances of some types of convicts of them committing another felony, then discuss how prison life will present the law breaker to an intense criminal atmosphere.
Crimes that presents minor harm that can be compensated, has motives that reflects some types of needs(sometimes severe needs) can better be dealt with through the community rather than exiling the criminal from his community, and community services just offers that. Serving the society can be a suitable punishment and also a second chance for the law breaker and his community to assess the causes to be eliminated and to provide new means for a new start. For example robbery felony can be a result of severe need for money and lack of employment in this case a suitable job and community support will suffice.
Prison is an ensemble of a wide range of criminals, forcing an ordinary person with a minor felony into this massive criminal community will surely worsen his case. Jail life will always maximize the criminal side of a person, as a result the person will most likely widen his range of possible crimes, more criminal techniques and even presents him with potential victims.
To conclude, some types of crimes must as a necessity be worked out within the society to speed up the rehabilitation process and to minimize chances of re-occurrence.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, look, second, so, then, for example, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 7.85571142285 178% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1403.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 281.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.99288256228 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09427095027 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73818846465 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 151.0 176.041082164 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.537366548043 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 452.7 506.74238477 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 16.0721442886 50% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 35.0 20.2975951904 172% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 42.5380344515 49.4020404114 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 175.375 106.682146367 164% => OK
Words per sentence: 35.125 20.7667163134 169% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.75 7.06120827912 124% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.67935871743 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.144344002532 0.244688304435 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0683325425132 0.084324248473 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0379608102229 0.0667982634062 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0922987586388 0.151304729494 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0303966585524 0.056905535591 53% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 19.6 13.0946893788 150% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 35.95 50.2224549098 72% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 16.9 11.3001002004 150% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.25 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.64 8.58950901804 112% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 78.4519038076 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 19.0 9.78957915832 194% => OK
gunning_fog: 16.0 10.1190380762 158% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.