Take a look at the question and the graph:
You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.
The line graph shows visits to and from the UK from 1979 to 1999, and the bar graph shows the most popular countries visited by UK residents in 1999.
Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
Write at least 150 words.
This graph illustrates data of UK residents travellers from and to UK in the period between 1979 to 1999.the chart shows information about the mostly wide known countries by the millions of UK residents visitors in the year1999.Over all it elaborates the boarding of the quota of travellers from UK and to it by the time till the year 1999. The UK residents travellers abroad had increased quietly over the period from 1979 to 1986.They had increased rapidly over the time from 1986 to 1994 till to reach the highest proportion at 1999,This for both travellers abroad the UK and people who visited the UK .France and Spain from the most marked countries took the highest proportion of the UK residents travellers in the year 1999 specially France reached more than ten millions of visitors ,While in the same year USA,Turkey and Greece took the lowest percentage of the UK residents visitors specifically turkey.
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...nd to it by the time till the year 1999. The UK residents travellers abroad had i...
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...oad the UK and people who visited the UK .France a...
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...1999 specially France reached more than ten millions of visitors ,While in the same year USA,T...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 0.0 7.0 0% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 5.0 5.60731707317 89% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 33.7804878049 95% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 900.0 965.302439024 93% => OK
No of words: 154.0 196.424390244 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.84415584416 4.92477711251 119% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.52273666998 3.73543355544 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 9.07696518748 2.65546596893 342% => Word_Length_SD is high.
Unique words: 77.0 106.607317073 72% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.5 0.547539520022 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 218.7 283.868780488 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.33902439024 23% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 1.0 8.94146341463 11% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 154.0 22.4926829268 685% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 0.0 43.030603864 0% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 900.0 112.824112599 798% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 154.0 22.9334400587 672% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 9.0 5.23603664747 172% => OK
Paragraphs: 1.0 3.83414634146 26% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 11.0 1.69756097561 648% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.09268292683 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.346332086298 0.215688989381 161% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.346332086298 0.103423049105 335% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0843802449381 0% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.346332086298 0.15604864568 222% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0819641961636 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 83.1 13.2329268293 628% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -67.91 61.2550243902 -111% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 0.0 6.51609756098 0% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 61.0 10.3012195122 592% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 17.78 11.4140731707 156% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 14.15 8.06136585366 176% => OK
difficult_words: 28.0 40.7170731707 69% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 54.0 11.4329268293 472% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 63.6 10.9970731707 578% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 61.0 11.0658536585 551% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum two paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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