Some people think that some types of criminals should not go to prison. Instead they should do unpaid work in the community. To what extent do you agree?
Currently, crime costs have increased compared to the past period. Some defenders argue that certain types of criminals should enjoy voluntary social service rather than sending them to prison. In my own opinion, I personally support the concept and I'll explain why.
Firstly, people who committed petty crimes should do community work. This is because all types of criminals are held in the same area and interact to a certain extent, once released they can re-commit these crimes against the society. For example, a person who is in jail for a family problem because of a particular person can commit murder by killing him in the future after being released from prison. Otherwise, if these people are used for a good cause or learned something while there were in jail may benefit them in the future then it is good for him and the community in his upcoming life.
Secondly, imprisonment is not the right way to punish all criminals. Few of them need to learn the right lessons before returning to the public so they can work and gain the respect of society and stop committing crimes. Inmates when providing free services to the community that will help them understand the value of hard work and take responsibility for their actions as they provide free services to the community. For example, when an offender has the opportunity to clean up rubbish from the main road, it will help them understand how to live better than of sending him to jail and providing years of free meals. Also, when a criminal is sent to prison, he encounters a group of like-minded criminals which increases the propensity to commit more violent crimes.
All in all, I totally agree with this as it will give them a second chance to improve their social life with respect and obedience.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 251, Rule ID: ILL_I_LL[1]
Message: Did you mean 'I'll'?
Suggestion: I'll
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, if, may, second, secondly, so, then, while, for example
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1468.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 306.0 315.596192385 97% => OK
Chars per words: 4.79738562092 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18244613648 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.50678092726 2.80592935109 89% => OK
Unique words: 178.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.581699346405 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 460.8 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.4165964024 49.4020404114 100% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.923076923 106.682146367 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.5384615385 20.7667163134 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.92307692308 7.06120827912 84% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.17992152793 0.244688304435 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0640273264087 0.084324248473 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0824966115005 0.0667982634062 124% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0956666678423 0.151304729494 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0528869751654 0.056905535591 93% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 50.2224549098 113% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.86 12.4159519038 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.03 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 78.4519038076 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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