Some people think that space exploration is a waste of resources while others think that it is essential for mankind to continue to explore the universe in which we live. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.
Some individuals in the world opine that the experiments and researches regarding space exploration is a time waste. Whereas, some human beings think that it is very crucial for the future. There are both advantages and disadvantages.
Firstly, I would like to explain the merits of space exploration. In my opinion, it is necessary to know about other planets due to the high volume of pollution. Global warming has been gradually increasing and it is damaging the earth’s life. Moreover, resources on our planet such as water, oxygen and other useful gases are being extinct. For example, recently ISRO sent the satellite called CHANDRAYAN- II to the moon to know about the available resources and climatic conditions present in the moon. In addition, the rate of employment will be increased in the stream of space research.
On the other hand, there are some demerits like decrease in the economy. Some of the local governments do not have enough budget then they should not perform these types of experiments. Furthermore, most of the projects on space exploration are being unsuccessful. Some of the scientists who are traveling to other planets by these rockets are resulting in death. For instance, one of the famous scientists in NASA recently went to the moon to perform some operations but when he was returning back to earth, unfortunately, he lost his life due to some medical issues and climatic conditions.
In conclusion, though there are both positives and negatives on space exploration, advantages outweigh the disadvantages. So I would prefer to continue the research on space exploration.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, furthermore, if, moreover, regarding, so, then, whereas, for example, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, such as, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1363.0 1615.20841683 84% => OK
No of words: 262.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.20229007634 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.02323427807 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.99611270399 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 154.0 176.041082164 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.587786259542 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 432.0 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 42.7251389699 49.4020404114 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 85.1875 106.682146367 80% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.375 20.7667163134 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.875 7.06120827912 154% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.212560168476 0.244688304435 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0653976337535 0.084324248473 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0371702507377 0.0667982634062 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.128278930432 0.151304729494 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0486540409308 0.056905535591 85% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.3 13.0946893788 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 50.2224549098 110% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.58 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.19 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 78.4519038076 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 9.78957915832 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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