some people think that space exploration is a waste of resources while others think that it is essential for mankind to continue to explore the universe in which we live.
Discuss both view points and give your opinion.
Universe is very complex which consist of various types of planets and stars. Nowadays scientist do many researches to explore them. Some think that it is only wastage of money and resources while other believe that is benefits to human to explore the universe. In this essay, I would discuss both view points before making final note.
To embark with, everyday new and innovative things are discovered in our surroundings and in space which provide helps scientist to know how these planets take place? and why it is different from each other. Secondly, it help researchers to find the planet like Earth which support life because due to increasing rate of population on Earth so they would migrate from earth. Thirdly, they also search for other types of people which are known as aliens because scientist received various types of signal from other stars and many UFO discs were also watched in space.
On the other hand, these types of researches consume a lot of money because in this they require more advance technology.Secondly, space ships which are sent in space for research were not came back to earth in more number of cases which create more waste in space. Thirdly, when government provide funds for space researches, they have to minimise funds for others development programmes such as education,poverty and health which decrease the overall development of country.
In my view, government first have to support their basic development needs which are more important for people. They have to create more funds for health and education after this remaining fund are used for other work such as space researches.
In conclusion, nowadays countries spent more on space researches to fine more about it and which consume most part of government revenues, so they have take care public health and education system first.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, if, second, secondly, so, third, thirdly, while, in conclusion, such as, in my view, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1544.0 1615.20841683 96% => OK
No of words: 302.0 315.596192385 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.11258278146 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1687104957 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61992312733 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 164.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.543046357616 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 477.9 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 65.372487563 49.4020404114 132% => OK
Chars per sentence: 118.769230769 106.682146367 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.2307692308 20.7667163134 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.84615384615 7.06120827912 125% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.236610005544 0.244688304435 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0883334171198 0.084324248473 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.05877635517 0.0667982634062 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.13565615719 0.151304729494 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0885964396198 0.056905535591 156% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.3 13.0946893788 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.65 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.02 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 78.4519038076 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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