People are getting overdependent on phones and internet.
Why it is happening?
Is it positive or negative development?
In the modern world, life of humans are ruled by technological gadgets and internet. People spend most of time in using their cellphones and surfing on internet. In this essay,i would elaborate why it is happening and is this positive or negative development in the following paragraphs.
Nowadays, their are numerous numbers of gadgets are available in market and human use these devices such as mobile phones because these things make peoples work easy and convenient. Everyone want to move with flow of society so they make them self update they do this things, which is good at some extent if they know its benefits and demerits.
To begin with, dependency of individuals on phones and internet which leads to lower their brain ability because nowadays people save their most of mobiles numbers in their phones but earlier people learn numbers thoroughly. Secondly, it also put adverse effect on their body as most of people spend 4-6 hours on mobile phone and on internet which effects its mental level and eye sight due to this people behaviour also alter.
In my opinion side it is positive development , as internet enables the hourly work in minutes which increases the productivity of things which means now their are so much programmes on internet which are developed and programmed in that matter people just enters the constraints and get answers in seconds. Secondly, mobiles help people to access most the information and details about something on internet and individuals also do online shopping which helps them to save their time. Thirdly, mobile market is also one of the most big industry which leads to huge part in country economy and internet also provide employment to many number of people. Other positive development, people are now do more shopping online which also is best way to save time and more convenient method.
In conclusion, dependency of people on these things is increasing day by day which is more positive development than negative as now people are busy in their work life due to mobile and internet their work get minimised and they spend quality time with family.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, second, secondly, so, third, thirdly, in conclusion, such as, in my opinion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 19.0 10.4138276553 182% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 24.0651302605 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 49.0 41.998997996 117% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1768.0 1615.20841683 109% => OK
No of words: 353.0 315.596192385 112% => OK
Chars per words: 5.00849858357 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.33454660006 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.52058460271 2.80592935109 90% => OK
Unique words: 175.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.495750708215 0.561755894193 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 563.4 506.74238477 111% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 29.0 20.2975951904 143% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 65.1410328953 49.4020404114 132% => OK
Chars per sentence: 147.333333333 106.682146367 138% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.4166666667 20.7667163134 142% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.75 7.06120827912 124% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 15.0 5.01903807615 299% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.295335102308 0.244688304435 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.117416316777 0.084324248473 139% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.078622860398 0.0667982634062 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.181678112778 0.151304729494 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0827508901446 0.056905535591 145% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.9 13.0946893788 129% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.04 50.2224549098 84% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 11.3001002004 129% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.37 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.7 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 78.4519038076 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.6 10.1190380762 134% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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