Some people think that space exploration is a waste of resources while others thinks that it is essential for mankind to continue to explore the universe in which we live. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.
Today, most people believe that discovering our universe requires high investment, and time while others consider that it is crucial to expand our knowledge in space exploration. I sincerely believe that space exploration is indispensable for humanity because people need to find an extra planet where they will live in the future and also establish communication with other galaxy habitats.
On the one hand, exploration of the universe is a high cost. All of the details like a titan, magnesium, and iron that are necessary for launching the rocket are rare and difficult to approach. The total cost of the rocket launching procedure is approximately around 15 billion dollars; therefore, companies such as NASA and ROSKOSMOS send their astronauts to orbit only once per two years. In addition, space exploration is not always a successful process. The finances, which are allocated to the investigation of the space, could be used in other spheres and projects. For instance, funding charity organizations like «HELP», in order to save the lives of people is more important and profitable than the exploration of the universe. Hence, discovering the space is unwise because it requires an immense amount of money and resources which could be used for other purposes.
On the other hand, in the nearest future, there will be no place for living on the earth due to overcrowding of the people. The population of the world is increasing rapidly, and it is forecasted that in 2050 there will be 14 billion citizens on the earth. Thus, it is crucial to explore the galaxy in order to find an extra planet to live. Furthermore, people and scientists are convinced that humanity is not alone in this universe. There are many occasions of interacting with UFO objects and aliens in history. If mankind continues exploring the universe and establishes communication with other planet’s habitats, humanity will have an opportunity to cooperate with them and continue the development of the world.
In conclusion, even if space exploration is a waste of finances and resources, it should be carried on and developed because there will be no place to live on the earth, and mankind should find and cooperate with other planet’s habitats.
| Post date | Users | Rates | Link to Content |
|---|---|---|---|
| 2021-04-25 | Zhakoooooooooo | 73 | view |
- Nowadays more and more people want to get things done instantly services information tasks Why is this Do you think this is a positive or negative development 56
- Some people believe that children should do what their parents tell them to do others think children must learn to think for themselves Discuss both views and give your own opinion 73
- In many countries today people in cities either live alone or in small family units rather than in large extended family groups Is this a positive or negative trend 78
- Genetic engineering is an important issue in society today Some people think that it will improve people s lives in many ways Others feel that it may be a threat to life on earth Discuss both these views and give your own opinion 78
- Some people say that advertising is extremely successful at persuading us to buy things Other people think advertising is so common that we no longer pay attention to it Discuss Both views and give your opinion 67
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Today, most people believe that discover...
^^^
Line 2, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...munication with other galaxy habitats. On the one hand, exploration of the uni...
^^^^
Line 2, column 21, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...r galaxy habitats. On the one hand, exploration of the universe is a high co...
^^
Line 2, column 66, Rule ID: ALL_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'all the'.
Suggestion: All the
...oration of the universe is a high cost. All of the details like a titan, magnesium, and ir...
^^^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...hich could be used for other purposes. On the other hand, in the nearest future...
^^^
Line 4, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ontinue the development of the world. In conclusion, even if space exploration...
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, hence, if, so, therefore, thus, while, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 23.0 13.1623246493 175% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 10.4138276553 163% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 41.998997996 117% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1872.0 1615.20841683 116% => OK
No of words: 366.0 315.596192385 116% => OK
Chars per words: 5.11475409836 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.37391431897 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.92177570474 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 184.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.502732240437 0.561755894193 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 609.3 506.74238477 120% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 0.809619238477 494% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.8956964307 49.4020404114 109% => OK
Chars per sentence: 117.0 106.682146367 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.875 20.7667163134 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.875 7.06120827912 112% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.265670162797 0.244688304435 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0877894007386 0.084324248473 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.05475827668 0.0667982634062 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.166991202571 0.151304729494 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0246164969644 0.056905535591 43% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.1 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 50.2224549098 81% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.65 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.65 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 91.0 78.4519038076 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
---------------------
Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
---------------------
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.