Some people think that sports involving violence such as boxing and martial arts should be banned from TV and international sporting competitions. What extent do you agree or disagree.
This is a fact that sports are extremely significant to keep us as fit as fiddle. Some people argue that there are some extreme sports that promotes violence such aa boxing as well as suggested that these supports are supposed to be strictly prohibited from television and international sporting competitions. While i believe that sports containing certain degree of risk should be banned, some potential benefits can be provided by the games such as boxing and martial arts.
On the one hand, some dangerous sports bring high level of violence, should not be telecasted on TV channels. I am going to demonstrate some prominent reasons of this phenomenon. First of all, In today’s contemporary era, children follow their role models to grow like them as celebrities and sport-stars work as role models for the public and fundamental duty is to develop sportsmanship instead of behaving badly and violently. To explain more, they are know that they have a big social responsibility and millions of young ones follow their lifestyles. Therefore, if they would create violence during sports competitions then it will be a negative impact on the behaviour of youngsters. Secondly, competing with each other for money or victory can cause bad behaviour or break up of relationships among players. Furthermore, children are vulnerable and comes under the effect easily so they may promote violence in the society. Secondly, Martial arts also contributes at large in violence as if not properly taught then might put negative impact. Finally, adults are compelled to follow their role models as they wish to become like them.
Moving further, violation and fighting leads to juvenile delinquency among young ones as if they will watch TV sports that comprises physical injuries and forceful behaviour then they would indulge in illegal activities such as murders, thefts and money Laundering etcetera. As a consequence, other youngsters living around in the society will be encouraged to commit crimes
On the other hand, along with adverse effects dangerous sports and martial arts can prove beneficial for the community. First of all, in today’s fast paced world everyone wants to be energetic as people have hectic schedule which makes them exhausted everyday. Hence, people need some energy and activeness in their daily lives. Also, martial arts are depicted as a sign of self confidence, motivation and courage. Besides, learning self-discipline and self-defence is a practice of martial arts as this is a kind of physical exercise which keeps body not only healthy by physically but also mentally. Apart from this, for working as a team, martial arts are considered as a best practice as whether it is done aa a individual activity but when someone joins a club to learn martial arts then it creates a sense of. Belongingness and lifelong relations. On the top of it, learning new skills increases confidence of children as when they present their skills in front of others then get praised which makes them delight.
To conclude, although martial arts and games like boxing are regarded as a violating exercises yet i believe that the trend is a positive development in the society.
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Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
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Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 21.0 10.4138276553 202% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 38.0 24.0651302605 158% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 58.0 41.998997996 138% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2681.0 1615.20841683 166% => OK
No of words: 519.0 315.596192385 164% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.16570327553 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.7730044521 4.20363070211 114% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83338164989 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 283.0 176.041082164 161% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.54527938343 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 834.3 506.74238477 165% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
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Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
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Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
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Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
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Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
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Sentence topic coherence: 0.079141411505 0.084324248473 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0803399267945 0.0667982634062 120% => OK
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Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.102790926339 0.056905535591 181% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.7 13.0946893788 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.0 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.1 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 142.0 78.4519038076 181% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
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text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.