Today, the high sales of popular consumer goods reflect the power of advertising and not the real needs of the society in which they are sold.
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
this is a fact that advertisements are all around us which impacts consumer behaviour. Some people argue that the trend does not reflect the real needs of customers, while i believe that people are under the great influence of advertisement, i also support that people follow trends and choose fashionable items whether they need those or not.
On the one hand, advertising products by the companies is an integral part of marketing in order to provide information about new goods and products that comes into the market. Firstly, today adds are given everywhere such as in Television, newspapers, youtube etcetera. most importantly, sometimes these are posted on vehicles of walls to reach more customers. therefore, when people watch adds of innovative products including information about the price, different colors , demonstration they impressed by those and buy even though they do not need. Secondly, adds are given in such a way that appeals the end users and they buy products as this is most puesuadive and manipulative tool of earning more and more profits by budinesses. finally, companies can take advantage by building customer base as it convinces customers to but new items which reflects their living standars. To be more specific, communicating product information in a way to attract customer needs, change their hanits and preferences, advertising is an important activity of organisations that is why all small and large companies spend money on adds.
On the other hand, l also emphasis the argument that advertisements do not reflect the needs truly. First of all, As we have discussed before that adds are telecasted for appealing final consumers, many times people purchase goods because they love item designs, colors and uniqueness instead of real need. Besides this, in today materialistic world people prefers to show their social status in the community, therefore they buy this stuff though they do not need. Apart from this, from convenience point of view, people choose advertised products because that already got the information through advertisements. Last but not least, they want to take advantage of new innovations that makes them curious to buy something new.
To conclude, although advertisements are given everywhere yet i believe that there is an readon behind that why people buy new stuff.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, finally, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, therefore, while, apart from, such as, first of all, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 16.0 7.30460921844 219% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 39.0 24.0651302605 162% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1971.0 1615.20841683 122% => OK
No of words: 373.0 315.596192385 118% => OK
Chars per words: 5.28418230563 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.39467950092 4.20363070211 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.90206493679 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 212.0 176.041082164 120% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.56836461126 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 610.2 506.74238477 120% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.7244408853 49.4020404114 107% => OK
Chars per sentence: 131.4 106.682146367 123% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.8666666667 20.7667163134 120% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.4 7.06120827912 133% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 17.0 5.01903807615 339% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.181769042284 0.244688304435 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0640870383558 0.084324248473 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.046353993888 0.0667982634062 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.110800879706 0.151304729494 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0547594487936 0.056905535591 96% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.9 13.0946893788 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 50.2224549098 94% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.64 12.4159519038 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.55 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 88.0 78.4519038076 112% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 9.78957915832 153% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.