Some people think that sports play an important role in the development of society. Others think they are nothing more than a leisure activity. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
While many people claim that sport is a crucial contributor to social development, others believe that it is merely a recreational activity. This essay will discuss both sides of this argument and give my perspective.
On the one hand, there is no doubt that most individuals play sport for leisure purposes. One of the major reasons is helping sports players relieve stress. Indubitably, modern citizens frequently face burgeoning and stressful study loads and workloads on daily basics, which can lead to they have to spend an enormous time for completion to avoid unwelcome consequences. As a result, this lifestyle choice will cause a wide range of mental and physical health conditions. For example, In Vietnam, the education authority permanently encourages students to play optional sport twice a week to diminish and prohibit several overloaded study loads-caused diseases in school-aged children.
On the other hand, it is clear that numerous sports players consider sports to be one of the significant factors in the development of society. One of the discernible reasons is proportionally engender enhanced productivity. Take my company as an example, after laying excessive emphasis on inundated tasks in long hours, exhausted employees are encouraged to take a break and go short jogging around the workplace with close colleagues. This activity is a financial-save method to intensify staff's concentration and performance on task finishes, which will aim at generating a higher profit for the business. Therefore, the government can collect an enormous tax from economic activities to pour highly proportion of investments into education and people's well-being.
In conclusion, some people may have seen playing sports as a stress-relieving tool. However, I espouse the notion that this habit can be an important driver of development within society because of increasing employee productivity to give the authority a chance to receive a higher amount of tax for allocating money to needed fields.
| Post date | Users | Rates | Link to Content |
|---|---|---|---|
| 2023-07-29 | phamkhuyen | 89 | view |
| 2021-10-07 | gianggiangvn | 89 | view |
| 2021-09-13 | Nhicute123 | 84 | view |
| 2021-07-17 | nagakhoa | 78 | view |
| 2021-07-16 | nagakhoa | 84 | view |
- Many people believe that it is easier to have a healthy lifestyle in the countryside Other believe that there are health benefits of living in cities Discuss both views and give your opinions 61
- Learning to manage money is one of the key aspects of adult life How in your view can individuals best learn to manage their money 56
- Task 1 The diagrams show changes in a student common room 59
- All over the world societies are facing a growing problem with obesity This problem affects both children and adults What are the reasons for this rise in obesity How could it be tackled 73
- New technologies and ways of buying and selling are transforming the lives of consumers To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion 61
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, may, so, therefore, well, while, for example, in conclusion, no doubt, as a result, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1706.0 1615.20841683 106% => OK
No of words: 311.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.48553054662 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.19942759058 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.14149061861 2.80592935109 112% => OK
Unique words: 199.0 176.041082164 113% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.639871382637 0.561755894193 114% => OK
syllable_count: 534.6 506.74238477 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 59.7121069322 49.4020404114 121% => OK
Chars per sentence: 121.857142857 106.682146367 114% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.2142857143 20.7667163134 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.5 7.06120827912 120% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.195930981378 0.244688304435 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0616364386374 0.084324248473 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0425844815009 0.0667982634062 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.119256474786 0.151304729494 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0306880329872 0.056905535591 54% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.5 13.0946893788 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 50.2224549098 81% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.56 12.4159519038 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.01 8.58950901804 117% => OK
difficult_words: 104.0 78.4519038076 133% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
---------------------
Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
---------------------
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.