Some people think that sports play an important role in the development of society. Others think they are nothing more than a leisure activity. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
Some people think that sports play an important role in the development of society. Others think they are nothing more than a leisure activity. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
There is a perpetual argument about the exact role that sports play for the society. Some school of thoughts believe that sports are nothing but creational activities, other assumed that it can enhance our world. In my point of view, I partly agree with the former opinion for some plausible reasons below.
It is undeniable that sports have lavish amounts of benefits for the thriving of countries. Admittedly, while playing sport people may acquire not only stable health but also valuable interpersonal skills. It can reduce their ability (susceptibility to) of suffering from both mental and physical illnesses. Similarly, they are more likely to sail though hardships and manager to succeed as they have enough skills and health compared to others. As a result, that kind of people directly contribute to the development of society by devoting their ability and effort in working.
Primary role of sport, on the other hand, is merely a pastime for those who enjoy playing it. If people are become too addicted in sports, they would lose valuable things. A majority of the sport fans, especially man, enjoy participating in sports betting that require them large amount of their budget. Causing to the fact that a plethora of household are stuck into debt or even go bankrupt as people are too addicted to this game. this social evil has leaded to the degradation of quality of society. What is more, overspending time on sports may reduce the productivity and efficiency of people’s work. In light of sparing almost time for sports, they may neither neglect their work project nor try to finish it with inattentiveness. For example, a sports fantasy is willing to pull an all-nighter to watch live sports matches as those games usually broadcast late at night, leading to the unawake condition in the following day
All in all, every coin has its two sides and sports are no exception. However, I believe that if people can make full use all the above-mentioned merits and take the demerits into account, sport are advantageous for everyone
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Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 435, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: This
...s people are too addicted to this game. this social evil has leaded to the degradati...
^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, may, similarly, so, while, for example, kind of, as a result, what is more, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 24.0651302605 141% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1866.0 1615.20841683 116% => OK
No of words: 373.0 315.596192385 118% => OK
Chars per words: 5.00268096515 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.39467950092 4.20363070211 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66079814359 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 220.0 176.041082164 125% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.58981233244 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 585.0 506.74238477 115% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 16.0721442886 124% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.4197093782 49.4020404114 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.3 106.682146367 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.65 20.7667163134 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.85 7.06120827912 83% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.394444980481 0.244688304435 161% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.12024040164 0.084324248473 143% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.131011531951 0.0667982634062 196% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.27499344131 0.151304729494 182% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.294935837478 0.056905535591 518% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 13.0946893788 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.72 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.34 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 90.0 78.4519038076 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 435, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: This
...s people are too addicted to this game. this social evil has leaded to the degradati...
^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, may, similarly, so, while, for example, kind of, as a result, what is more, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 24.0651302605 141% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1866.0 1615.20841683 116% => OK
No of words: 373.0 315.596192385 118% => OK
Chars per words: 5.00268096515 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.39467950092 4.20363070211 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66079814359 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 220.0 176.041082164 125% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.58981233244 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 585.0 506.74238477 115% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 16.0721442886 124% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.4197093782 49.4020404114 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.3 106.682146367 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.65 20.7667163134 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.85 7.06120827912 83% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.394444980481 0.244688304435 161% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.12024040164 0.084324248473 143% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.131011531951 0.0667982634062 196% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.27499344131 0.151304729494 182% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.294935837478 0.056905535591 518% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 13.0946893788 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.72 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.34 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 90.0 78.4519038076 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.